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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    oh it's a wall plan? that's why you kept it simple...aight.
     
  2. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    sume, ras also goes into detail.
     
  3. ~Saoten154~

    ~Saoten154~ Senior Member

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    the amk peices look sick
     
  4. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    exchange with tricks.
    i went simple.
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  5. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    what's on the "K"?

    good simples though.
     
  6. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    looks like an arm holding it up
     
  7. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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  8. Chop Logic

    Chop Logic Senior Member

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    Edward - Looks good, I'd ditch the hand though because I couldnt tell if it was a K or a Y.



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    Shitty picture from my phone. Crits please?
     
  9. Zep0

    Zep0 Senior Member

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    I thought it was a broom, Fuck. Still a good simple.
    Canvas for my girl...I was going to put her last name under the L but decided against it, hence it being up.
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    Writers block just some shit.
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  10. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    i swear evryone these days thinks they can do a fuckin canvas and they all got the same fucking concept splattered paint, please don't ruin any more fuckin canvases.
    chop- go simpler i cant make out any letters except an N. please go simpler.
    rayse one- you have come along nicely, thats a pretty nice freestyle. Lose alot of those random bars though they make the piece not flow as well.
     
  11. Chop Logic

    Chop Logic Senior Member

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    bump, bottom of the page'd.
     
  12. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    dope simples sezer. donno about the thing on the k tho


    ras - looks good, i agree with sume tho that you should work on your letters more. instead because your peice is not the focal point of the sketch. good work none the less

    zepo - i likwe the background not so much the peice. it seems forced.

    chop logic - lose the stuff around the peice.

    pen freestyle from school. the R didnt fit though. crits?
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  13. DM!

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  14. Zep0

    Zep0 Senior Member

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    Bump

    Sezer, blow me. I'll do what I want.

    Rayes move the bottom bar of the S farther out, it'll balance it with the wider A.
    And watch some of those extensions, looking a little out of place: left side of A top of S and top right of E.
     
  15. rayseone

    rayseone Senior Member

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    it would have been more balanced if there was an R in the but like i said i couldnt fit it in
     
  16. Zep0

    Zep0 Senior Member

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    True, it still looks good, but you know what I'm saying with some of those extensions?
     
  17. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    Bump

    Sezer, blow me. I'll do what I want.

    Rayes move the bottom bar of the S farther out, it'll balance it with the wider A.
    And watch some of those extensions, looking a little out of place: left side of A top of S and top right of E. [/b][/quote]
    watch your mouth hoe ass ****.
    talk is cheap, battle?
     
  18. Zep0

    Zep0 Senior Member

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    PM me for info.
     
  19. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    rays -- haven't really been a fan of your addons, but in particular I don't like these. letters lookin alright though. also, ever heard of an extra sheet of paper? :p

    zep0 --
    canvas - personally I'm just sticking to paper until I get better. waste of materials until I get my work looking real good. the letters themselves, I don't like the addon on the bottomright of the K and E, and the negative space under the L makes it look out of place. underneath the dot of the I looks weird to me too. as for the 3D: I really really hate the black line shit unless it's done properly or rather, a certain way. they don't line up so it looks off.
    1st sketch - the "one" under the E looks meh. don't like the S. dropshadow is also off in places.
    2nd sketch - needs tweaking. bend in the bottom of the E looks out of place.

    DM -- all around, make your stuff consistent. learn letter structure by building your letters from bars.

    chop logic -- is it supposed to say "ink"? whatever it is, simplify.

    aaaand a flick, not the usual, all pencil:
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    topleft of the S doesn't follow the other letters, U could be changed so it doesn't have that big empty space in the middle of it.

    EDIT: oh yeah a craptacular thing I did like a week and a half ago. badtacular indeed.
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  20. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    and sometimes they like to use hotdogs for H's

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    old sheeeeet
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    no homo
    drunk shit
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    old name
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    mad angry old garbage
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    the throw sucks? i just love the R
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    bumping for balls on chin.