what ever happend to people giving a shit and criting befor posting ?
niccsacc nice to see u back im liking the bottom chracter

 

shit for a battle i dont think i entered in time. why not show it.

 

ok... neat design, bad colors.

 

drak,
dont do curvy extensions,
it doent fit.
do like jagged stabby ouchy extensions.
but good looking.

 

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Wondering what to fill it with.Lol at the crumb on the D.

 

opte- needs some good ol fashioned work
drak- like how you tweaked the r, shits startin to come along

some shit found on my comp
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clean and everything man, just looks too much like 'bong'.

 

borg, it does look like it says bong
drak, the round loose bit on the leg of the r looks like it doesnt fit in
because all the other ones look hard edged or rectangular

highlighter coloured

 

bumping for crtis
morn nice chracter and colors

 

dim, i'd say cut down on extensions some more, keep some in, but a lot just don't flow to me.

 

can someone give me tips on how to improve? besides the fact that i missed some keylining on the inside of the c. it says ecos by the way.

 

exhale- i would shorten the letters, and not place each letter behind another where in your piece the letters are difficult to read bc theyre hidden behind one another, just cram the letters together, watch out for alot of negative space, and that shit should be tight

 

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Changed the letters a bit.

 

exhale - that looks real nice, but the 2nd letter is too hidden.

drak - not a bad attempt, add another doo-dad between the top of the R and A.

it looks really shaky but in real life its really straight, i used a ruler i think its just my scanner.
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crits?

 

Its ok but i dont think the R fits in, keep them straight !!

Crits please...?
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was chilling at my moms work, waiting for a ride home..
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the chicken fish is simple, yet brilliant!

i love it.

and the letters look pretty sick. those office highlighters? XD

i cant read them though. =\

 

no not at all... tell your cuzzo not to use arrows as the ends of his letters and to try some simple letters.. or atleast tone it down alot, and tell him to not break the ends of the letters either... geez thats just bad.. why would you say sik wid it??....... tell him to get a bs account to maybe.. im not tryin to rag on him hes just off to a bad start.

 

holy damn. calm down and listen to people with more experience than you. what your "cuzzo" did was just generic "hey look if i make tons of arrows and random lines it counts as graffiti." too bad that doesn't work. if he doesn't want to do simples than at least work of mildstyle bars.