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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. inkbits

    inkbits Senior Member

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    Comments are on point man, that looks like a maze on a mcdondalds menu or something it's not styled. All bars shouldn't be exactly the same thickness and rigid like that someone will poke an eye out. Colour will just be colour, won't improve it's structure, toning down would help a lot man.
     
  2. siZo

    siZo Member

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  3. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    horizontal bars on the M are too thin.
     
  4. krazzie_ammo

    krazzie_ammo Senior Member

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  5. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Whose sketch are yall talkin' about?
     
  6. prank

    prank Senior Member

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    crits plz
     

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  7. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    letters are fine for simpels but i see the supermario world bite
     
  8. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    hah.
    is it really that hard?
    its says "re"

    and yeah.
    my prismas are basically deaddd.
    i believe theyre staples brand?
     
  9. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    i thought that right extending leg of the R was a haggard D? or something? upside down U? crack cocaine?

    yeah. and when you get new prismas you have to take out a fucking loan. too expensive for me man.

    sweet though.

    highlighters work pretty well for sketching in my opinion. i love my neons.
     
  10. bountyhunter113

    bountyhunter113 Elite Member

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    drak- imo tone it down on all em add-ons n stuff and focus on improving ur struct more and developing style

    yo baze,who were u talkin bout?
     
  11. MainEvent

    MainEvent Senior Member

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    uhhh- nice handstyle. not real sure what the piece says, but shits cool.

    scam- good simple letters

    czon- feelin the vertical piece alot and the last flick you upped. dope ish


    ayo if i could get some crits on these, thatd be great

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  12. Volume_one_

    Volume_one_ Senior Member

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    drew some things last night
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    try to focus on the grim the rest are just there

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    and also on the throwie in this one

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    Someone tell me if they have seen this character befor cus i drew it last night and i dont think I copied from something i may have seen in the past
     
  13. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

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    Work on the bottom style, it's much better, they are pretty decent simples. Just work on the E a little bit, the other letters look pretty good
     
  14. F.R.A.T.

    F.R.A.T. Senior Member

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    wow, finally back from a bullshit year of school and studying:mad:

    uhh fucking trippy shit
    volume the last style is ur best, try using bars for the other stuff but u probbs already know that
    main event dont put the random bars extending from the bottom of ur letters
     
  15. ENES.ONE

    ENES.ONE Senior Member

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    i love this shit.. lookin hella clean
     
  16. Jroc1993

    Jroc1993 Elite Member

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  17. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    See folks...that's what happens when you don't use bars.

    *as I point to the "R"...

    :)
     
  18. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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  19. exhale

    exhale Senior Member

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    nem the left leg of the k looks distorted
    jroc the o looks too big
    matr not really feeling the add ons on the 2nd flick

    ecos throwie n piece crits/tips on how to improve please
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  20. siZo

    siZo Member

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