Sizo-
well,
maybe if youd try whats in that thread,
and just work on it all, by yourself.
for a few months.
then you could get somewhere.
we dont just tell you what we did to get where we are for no reason.
its to help you.
if you dont wanna take it thats fine,
but get the fuck out.

 

scam change your name
try work on a simpler throw up itll be easir to get the drop shadow down pact but the botom peice is good but for some reason i dont like the points on the letters but i do like the fill
crits on my peice please last time im bumping it

 

nem - practice your bubble letters more
dim - stick to simples for a while
as dim said, scam change yuor name

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your R looks like a C and your H looks like a R
but i like it.

 

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went a lil bit simpeler wit that one

yea hoxer i like it

 

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like the top one mattfoo but not so sure boout teh bottom on.

infact on closer lok the both bangin

 

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^sankent
its kinda messy but ... crits?

 

wtf is that character?? does it have a little penis??id change the A it looks like a H

 

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can i get some crits and some suggestions on which colours i should use

 

chill out nero he was just stating a well known rule around here
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u got that part about the cant draw a straight block letter right tho
heres my fucked up attempt at bars
crits?

 

damn this is fresh shit definitly needs a BUMP!!!!!!!

 

Eskoner-I don't know why you post in the toy section anymore.keep it up.

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New piece.

 

much much much better, finally a newjack who follows crits,

dont have aroows going the opposite direction, unless ur gunna do it all cymetricly(sp)

 

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didnt get any crits on the last one so i did a new one
CRITS!?

 

^^morne- look at my simples and just add an e, draw them closer and make them all the same size, fill in the gaps with a 3d towards the bottom of the letters

 

jroc, even though your letters arent great. its fun to color stuff. learn about what colors go well together. schemes. etc. dont be afraid to bust out some crayolas mayng. practice your bars.

drak, you should add an extension to fill that void between the top of the R and A. i would guess from the A, rather than the R. but it just seems empty there.

esk that dude on the inner tube is nasty as hell!! i love it.

oh yeah.

my shitty ass one-liner attempt.

dont just laugh. give me some suggestions on how to improve it.

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Morne - keep it up we're from the same city and i must say keep it up this town needs some style WITH letter structure

Nem - I got nothin sry man

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crits?

 

if ur doing a one liner u need to space the letters out moreso than just a straight peice, cuss overlapping one liners make it loo likea a plate of passta