Morne- work on your structure [Broken External Image]:http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/420/img5537jb0.jpg I know it's shit but anything I could of done to make this better?
-mike try and make ur letters same size? -sank duno wat 2 say . better than me nem and sinn d uno wat 2 say ethir =/ \= do it in pencil first =/
sinn i think it still looks good regardless of different letter size, the only thing i would say to tweak is maybe bring the right side of the T down more (the lil piece pointing down) sorry if that doesnt make sense
sank- like that shit can't wait to see it in color j roc - make your bars the same width and everything...also try making a block letter from scratch without bars and then try and get bars from your letter...it'll help you get a feel of the letter if you see what I'm saying. whats up i dont usually post on BS but i need some help/crits [Broken External Image]:http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6638/0701072149of0.jpg does anyone have any advice for me? thanks
that looks fine just do your 3d the same directions on all of the letters... good to see someone write mister something. used used to write mr.x but i dont like Xs. theyre hard..
yeah i dont get u at all but heres another attempt, coloured this time [Broken External Image]:http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/5152/mornerollerun4.jpg cel- i aint feelin yur M crits?
make yoor lines straighter, and yoor missin a few lines of 3d, onless yoo prposeflly left them. View attachment 286739 View attachment 286740 which one is better?
Drakula: i actually like it. different a? Sinn: i like the colors. Mike: make everything the same size and basic. Jroc1993: your 3d is messed up. GEKS: work on it im not really feeling any of the letters cept for the s. character sketches from last nite. critz?
bt which one is better my friend thinks his throws are better than mine, and i disagree. so i wont say which one is mine, bt jst say which is better
GEKS - i deffinatly like the second one best, the whole thing has a nice flow cause the letters are about the same height and width
stupid, getting the end of the page: kelio - i like the bottem most charak in the first picture, the teeth look ill so, i stoped going for such a fezatish style and tryed to do simpler stuff, (the first pen lines got kinda smeared) [Broken External Image]:http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g274/AKpress/DSCN0040.jpg improved?