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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. amk

    amk Elite Member

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  2. Dr. Kazer

    Dr. Kazer Senior Member

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    Dank NC: Work on the E for sure. That little step extension on the bottom part of the E is wack. Also; make the top of the E smaller so it's the same size as everything else.
     
  3. SOOF

    SOOF Senior Member

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    working on some diffrent styles,and my letters suck but im working on em as we speak, crits
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  4. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    AMK
    do simple letter tags.
    like on your keyboard!
    woo fun.
    same thing as getting better at pieces, jsut about.
     
  5. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Bump for more crits.
     
  6. GrimeyScraper

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  7. RaydBGK

    RaydBGK Member

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    Drak - way too many arrows. They start to look tacky at a certain point.
     
  8. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    dude, i like the style especially on the R. the other two letters could use a lil work but i like em.
     
  9. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    and hell yes Drakula that K has it goin now. i think it was the offsetting of the arrow. but its dope. put some 3D and some color and itl be hot.

    amk i reallly like the style as allways. im just not down with the hats on either side of the lettering. but thats just me. i prolly woulda thrown a broken off arow in. but its tight.


    soof lay off the heavy coloring until u get ur letering really grounded. and try using bars like in the one drakula did up there.


    dank- id take out the bits sticking outa the S the R and the bottom of the E. but the letterings looking solid. i like the charachter tho. defenitely and painty.
     
  10. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    Scare..man..it isnt a hat...it is a broken off arrow...a euro style arrow..go look at sum euro ism and different styles man..hahaha...funny guy...thanks too man...much appreciated...noone gies crits round er no more..
     
  11. near

    near Senior Member

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    literally the first time i have ever finished a pen freestyle without fucking it up beyond belief...i might sketch this one and do it up nice...use yer imagination to erase some of the lines u can still make out :p
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  12. Blackeyed_Pea

    Blackeyed_Pea Senior Member

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    thats dope nearOH just make the N a little bigger? dunno
     
  13. near

    near Senior Member

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    YUS KURSOH! haha yeh the letters got a lil bigger as they went along...sigh the downside to pens...lets dine on baby tonight?
     
  14. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    amk yeah i just call em hats cuz im not down with em. ahaha. but thats just me. and they do fit the lettering real nice.

    and near- i like the arrow on the right of the R. it connects well.
     
  15. Mr Tasty

    Mr Tasty Banned

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    im bored..

    near - i like that alot..apart from the N..its not bad tho...but i can see a cool way to join all the letters together maybe try it out...just an idea..might look pretty dope

    drak - love it ..keeps getting better and better...dont like the A at all tho

    spoof - gooooo simple ur letters look like boogers

    amk - i love ur style..makes me happy...likei ts dancing

    dank - maybe dont overlay the top of the S to the middle..looks good tho
     
  16. Apoc

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  17. Dinan 3er

    Dinan 3er Senior Member

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    apoc. looks really clean. maybe try adding a background now.
     
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  18. Dinan 3er

    Dinan 3er Senior Member

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  19. Apoc

    Apoc Elite Member

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    I figured I pretty much have my letters down (they are a bit sloppy there, I can do much better in a real piece) I have to focus on characters and/or background styles.

    Dank... that shit is played out homie, you gunna get crushed by locals... At least change the spelling.. like daynk or dankt or some original shit. Make sure no one else writes it...

    and to clear up any confusion I write aon, not aone.
     
  20. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    Apoc...i wouldnt say ou have them fully down..as it takes years right ?...eh...still...if i aint right..you have em down..nice shite...i ont like teh forms of em..but thats me..hehe..keep up the good work..

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    quick experiment..
    its all about pimp my K..