Amk- i reaallly like the K maybee blend it into the body of the letter. a lil like the bottom of the a and m?. its tight tho. finished the dilate
havent tried workin on my letters for quite some time now crits on this quiky plz EDIT :shit seems like im getting worse...out of practice... heres some sketchs from a few months back.. ^old ruff sketchs..lots of mistakes and shit bits^
fly stuff there tasty, really feeling the flow you got goin especially that E on the bottom pic . . . honestly its a perfect E and it makes me jealous amk when you finally decide to paint remember to rub the 3rd rail for good luck!!!
youve gotten so damn good. ahh this is ill. heres my first attempt for the sher battle.. View attachment 289098
yo, im really feelin' that Sher one. but that gap in the left part (next to the S) is sort of screwing with the flow. some random shit... [Broken External Image]:http://www.imagehosting.com/out.php/i893105_pencilsketch.jpg i know i should probably go simpler. and i didnt clean it up at all, so its pretty sloppy (lots of extra lines and shit)
your letter structure needs some work, specially the D, but your shading skills are mad smooth. they look like they are poppin out.
the main problem with the D is the hole in the middle doesnt correspond with lines on the outside (i.e. the hole is a triangle but the outside of the D has like 5 sides...)
Mr Tasty - really like your t's Drakula - try adjusting your letters so they dont float here's my recent stuff..crits?? [Broken External Image]:http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/9394/13dj1.jpg
tasty man i dun even know why u post in the toys forum.. ur shit it dope.. like pen freestyle i did while watching tv..crits?? it says (SA and then in brackets in the middle its "ag" so put it together its saga.. i was to lazy to put the extra A and G in...
bump for critz dial.on- that has mad flow, but i dont understand what your trying to say it says.. where are these "brackets"?
i cant see the pic so i cant crit [Broken External Image]:http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/5020/mornesketchkc2.jpg i fucked up the 3-d but hows the structure?
damn.... thats queer. your structure isnt too bad, you just gotta even it out a little. the left of the N is all fucked up and the left of the R and E actually are too, in the same way. take out that slant. and you might wanna change your name, thats too close to morn
j roc- work on your letter structure some more. i wouldnt bother coloring anything in right now.. [Broken External Image]:http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1188/ak018zf5.jpg ya know what to do..