My shit

The throwy Is pretty dope dunno bout that lil circle on top da T tho
Bltz Id go simple letters like blocks and shit on ur keyboard Right now ur
just trying to hard(Everyone Does when they first start) start easy and slowly evolve

 

your letters are looking way to straight and jagged, try curving parts of them, not all bars need to be staright you're allowed to bend them.

just a repost and something new

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in "the abominable dr. asma" your B's dont flow

 

I agree the B's dont flow in it

 

Someone mind explaining how i upload picss?
If i did it then dont bother

 

yeah u uploaded it but go to http://www/imageshack.us and upload it there then copy the direct link to image, then click the little mountain thing and paste the link in there.
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some simples im workin on
crits?

 

^ bars should have same thickness/width for the most part, like in your M and onot like your O R and N.

 

morne try putting more curve in your letter
old pic never got any critz

 

i know it's old but i just got a better pic of it



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kazer the bottom leg of the second k got a lil fat where it connects to the body of the letter. its a nice style though.

and chalk. wow. its really tight. the only thing i can think of is the charachter is a little static. but i love the texturing and the trunk.

 

That elephant is so fucking dope, the only thing I can say is that the throw looks a little flat perspective wise.

 

I love your characters Chalk...keep it up bro, and "stay up".

lol

 

verse not really feelin those letters. to be honest. careful with leaning your V to me it sort of reminds me of a simple J

 

i have trouble keepin the bars the same size but i try fix it best i can
bump for a few more crits?

 

hey guys i'm new to the forum
just been admiring the work of everyone in the forums in the past few days and decided to give a few attempts. what yall think? crits?

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i say go admire the advice in the new to graff thread, cuss they all suck.
dont take that as an inslut, everybody sucked when they started

 

check the new to graff threadin the toy forums its a sticky, read all the stuff in there, use bars and stay simple. the throw i not all that bad on the first phot, just the s is a bit awkward