Drak i love everything you do. the top of the R needs an extension. but i agree that doing different letters would develop your style more. but its all sick. make some full pieces and color em. o and demo. the coloring is nice and clean. you should take it off lined paper. and i dont really like the way the e came out. is it upper or lower case?>? if its lower. maybee curve the back of the E. but i like ur dropdown shadow.
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Eack - the E's in all ur pieces look odd to me....maybe try an uppercase E to match the rest of the letters or just work on the letter structure of the lowercase E Demo - Im really feeling that style, i especially like ur M keep it up....in my opinion, u dont belong in the toy forum right now but id listen to wut more experienced writers say, just putting it out there btw, wut markers do u use? cuz i been looking to get a more faded look to mine (like ur beige)
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View attachment 291715 1 View attachment 291716 Eack - the E's in all ur pieces look fucked up to me....maybe try an uppercase E Demo - Im really feeling that style, i especially like ur M keep it up.
demo feelin that shit like the shadwo but ya somethin about that E bugs me.. heres something new i was trying..its a bit sloppy and the GA at the end are small cuzz i ran outta room...other than that.. crits?.. and sorry its sideways...
I definately suggest that you refine your style, there is to much going on but nothing enhancing the overall letter structure. Well hope this isnt to much of an eye sore ohh and Dawse you are really on to something with that funkay style my man keep it up... [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/7997/scan0023qc6.jpg
a letter structure from you really doesnt mean much with that sketch ^^.. lol.. no beef but lol... new one.. only a SA.. ill do a GA later
i think i decided to go with the simpler flat st. vs the more complex version. this is what i drew up just now . quick coloring. I think when i paint it i'll open up the A so a lil 3d can show through i think that's what it is really missing. and a bonus pic of me practicing the letters a bit with scrap cans. ran out of room. the A needs to be further away from the L also. I need a bigger practice board. [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v495/k_vandal/flajpg
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oh my lanta! umm tac i dont really know how to put it nicely but u need to go waaaaay back.go to the new to graff thread and learn what bars are and do simples for a while. draw letters like u see them on ur keyboard eventually putting 3d on them until ppl here start tellin u ur good enough to move on. also i would wast markers coloring crap that isnt good. not bein mean, just stating the truth. chalk, can control is pretty good, i just dont dig that style but good job
Tac*ill be honest looks like shit go to simples and learn structure View attachment 291745 yes im aware the i fucked up the 3D crits?
Chalk - im liking that style man. Wing - the backround is nice and i like the O and the W, the rest could be imrpoved. Sinn - i like the letters but not the extensions you've put on 'em, the fill is pretty nice though. Tac - practice simples till you get used to the letters and that, go the new to graff thread for tutorials. I been experiemting with add ons and what not. [Broken External Image]:http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/6295/sketchojk3.jpg CRITS?
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id have to agree with hoodrich..god is bak.. ye flat feelin that nice and clean heres some shit ive been workin on..crits? (saga)
dial, that karak is dope, but try and extend the top of the 's' a lil bit wing, make ya letters wit bars and no color or 3d [Broken External Image]:http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a171/Djscratch/neam2.jpg
i like this. i think itll get a lot better with time but its definietly got potential. only thing i have a big problem with is the not fully colored a's