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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Scare2

    Scare2 Senior Member

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    Drak i love everything you do. the top of the R needs an extension. but i agree that doing different letters would develop your style more. but its all sick. make some full pieces and color em.

    o and demo. the coloring is nice and clean. you should take it off lined paper. and i dont really like the way the e came out. is it upper or lower case?>? if its lower. maybee curve the back of the E. but i like ur dropdown shadow.
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  2. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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  3. Eack

    Eack Senior Member

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  4. From the Ground Up

    From the Ground Up Senior Member

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    Eack - the E's in all ur pieces look odd to me....maybe try an uppercase E to match the rest of the letters or just work on the letter structure of the lowercase E

    Demo - Im really feeling that style, i especially like ur M keep it my opinion, u dont belong in the toy forum right now but id listen to wut more experienced writers say, just putting it out there
    btw, wut markers do u use? cuz i been looking to get a more faded look to mine (like ur beige)
  5. Proper-issh

    Proper-issh Banned

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    ***MONTHLY DIGITAL BATTLE (Advanced/Toy)***

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  6. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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  7. Dial.on

    Dial.on Senior Member

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    demo feelin that shit like the shadwo but ya somethin about that E bugs me..

    heres something new i was trying..its a bit sloppy and the GA at the end are small cuzz i ran outta room...other than that.. crits?.. and sorry its sideways...

  8. Stinky

    Stinky Senior Member

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    I definately suggest that you refine your style, there is to much going on but nothing enhancing the overall letter structure. Well hope this isnt to much of an eye sore ohh and Dawse you are really on to something with that funkay style my man keep it up...
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  9. Dial.on

    Dial.on Senior Member

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    a letter structure from you really doesnt mean much with that sketch ^^.. lol.. no beef but lol...

    new one.. only a SA.. ill do a GA later

  10. HoodRichSucka

    HoodRichSucka Elite Member

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    god's back..

    ...scribbles phhh..
  11. Chalk

    Chalk Senior Member

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    i think i decided to go with the simpler flat st. vs the more complex version. this is what i drew up just now . quick coloring. I think when i paint it i'll open up the A so a lil 3d can show through i think that's what it is really missing. and a bonus pic of me practicing the letters a bit with scrap cans.
    ran out of room. the A needs to be further away from the L also. I need a bigger practice board.
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  12. Tac*

    Tac* New Member

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  13. FIN one

    FIN one Senior Member

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    oh my lanta! umm tac i dont really know how to put it nicely but u need to go waaaaay back.go to the new to graff thread and learn what bars are and do simples for a while. draw letters like u see them on ur keyboard eventually putting 3d on them until ppl here start tellin u ur good enough to move on. also i would wast markers coloring crap that isnt good. not bein mean, just stating the truth.

    chalk, can control is pretty good, i just dont dig that style but good job
  14. -Sinn-

    -Sinn- Senior Member

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    Tac*ill be honest looks like shit go to simples and learn structure
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    yes im aware the i fucked up the 3D crits?
  15. *Wing*

    *Wing* Senior Member

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  16. repsSDN

    repsSDN Senior Member

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    Chalk - im liking that style man.
    Wing - the backround is nice and i like the O and the W, the rest could be imrpoved.
    Sinn - i like the letters but not the extensions you've put on 'em, the fill is pretty nice though.
    Tac - practice simples till you get used to the letters and that, go the new to graff thread for tutorials.

    I been experiemting with add ons and what not.
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  17. drapes1125

    drapes1125 Senior Member

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  18. Dial.on

    Dial.on Senior Member

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    id have to agree with hoodrich..god is bak..:D

    ye flat feelin that nice and clean

    heres some shit ive been workin on..crits?
  19. Chulo

    Chulo Senior Member

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  20. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    i like this.
    i think itll get a lot better with time but its definietly got potential.
    only thing i have a big problem with is the not fully colored a's