Saga that is pretty sick.I think you should get rid of the bit coming out the top left of the S.Also colour in those parts of the A's and lose the mouth on the bandana of the character.Other than that it's great.

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Just one more scan before I add 3D and colour.

 

Yea Dial your A's are on lock man, really the only weak letter is your s, perhaps try and give it the same flair as your A's but keeping its own identity if that makes any sense. And now for some more of my crap...ugh
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that neam is up in canada

 

this pretty much looks like you tried to bite inkbits. yo fail!

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Core,the bottom left and top right are sick man.Looks like you've got your own style already.The rest I'm not feeling mainly cuz they look sort of bent in places.But keep it up anyways.

 

can i get some crits?
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Good call Baze..

Drak..aint feelen that one mate....maybe the arrows i dont know...the letters are good so keep em up...they are what matter most..
stinky..yah ish is growen on me..

so..
i did what bore told me to and " pushed up my letters together and trying not to lose flow "

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i kinda like these letters so ima redraw them with out extensions and make it cleaner..
unless the extensions are aight. ?

peace.

 

haha someone been caught biting,,

Neam try doing simples ey
Ras that looks good but that M shouldn't be placed under the a and some extensions have to leave like the one the last A on the right
Drak Looks sick

coloured sketch i done,i dunno what happened with my scanner but it doesnt scan certain colours and makes my stuff look mad blurry so i had to take a pic with a shitty cam :

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i dunno what i tried with the brown colouring inside but i wished after iv done that i didn't do it in the first place w.e crits

 

Amkah I don't think any of the extensions are working.They just look uneven and rushed.Also I don't like the bits where the letters fuse into one.I liked your older pieces,go back to them.

South Pole the letters are nice and simple but make em a bit bigger.You've just squashed them in so we can't really appreciate them.

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Finished 3D and forcefield.Sharpies suck balls.

 

Amk thankyou for the kind words, also I believe that you have stumbled upon your most ambitious style to date. I strongly suggest that you settle and develope this into something incredible, easier said than done but, you have enough determination to do so in a timely manner. Shoot for the moon if ya miss at least you'll be in the stars. Have a goodone

 

chulo-the letters arent the same size and there is almost no flow at all. and i would suggest writing something different,cuz if u dont, you'll get more shit about ur name then crits everytime u post here.

dial on- i personally dont feel it. the letters get bigger, the character is ok.just color it i guess.

drak- i thought u said u were gonna post something new....
ur stuff isnt bad, i would just like to see you try something new cuz if you dont, how are u gonna know ur better at a different letter or style?

 

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Drak- You are are going somewhere with this style, and i can feel it, keep up the good work mr.

Neam - Bars.

Amkah- i like the extensions, but the h at the end looks a bit off, you migh wanna try and fix that .

Torn - thats the best ive seen from you so far, cuz its simples .

 

yeah the pushing letters together think is kinda what i try to do. what I've learned so far: don't stack them or rotate them too much, just try to fit them together. draw each letter in anticipation of the next.

that first dawse is nice.

 

thanks for the crits boys
Dawswk..feelen eeeem...my help improved you then..i was right...you was wrong..hahah i love iiittttt !!!

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did what you said....kinda..

 

the first A is crisp.. the M looks more basic than all the other letters, bend the one leg in more and add some random shit.. i think the K is a bit high up, maybe make the back leg a bit lower and that part that kicks out bring it down too.. and the last 2 letters need to be re-done

 

BUMP

amkah, as hungr said, re-do the last 2 letters.

 

just some new style ive been sorta working with heres 3 trys.

hate the E and A on this one. love the N

the E and A are a bit better, hating the Z alot, and the N isnt bad i guess... just i shoulda brought the left side down under the A abit.

this one is my most recent.
(sketched in this order)

crits, comments, all appreciated

 

ANEZ the letter shouldn't be all sharp like that.Keep the same shapes next time but use bars to construct solid letters that make sense.

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I don't really know what to say to that so I'll just say thanks.

And Anez you may have used bars but not properly.I.E don't make them sharp or inconsistent.

edit: Hey where did every ones post's go?