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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
Ummmm, no. Lose the arrows and work on you letters...a lot.
to the man who writes "sake" if u plan on getting up in NYC writing sake and yer not throwing shit up as hard as sake is doing it people will recognize and u will probably catch hard beef, seeing as peeps from NYC like to beef.. u may be in another country but NYC isnt far from Montreal..and im more than positive he has shit up there, cause he has shit up in enough places.. and the fact that u said no one in the states knows sake or "canadian graff" is retarded because sake did a production with Sever and Rime who are from farther away than NYC... so i think u should change yer name, u can still rock the same style throw ups but u should probably change your name
cerex id make the L a bit bigger but besides that itas got potential unlike mine lol
crits ? (dont bother bout the o's, i jut didnt put the o thing in, dont no why)
urban pirate - colors are coll but work on LETTERS
cerex - it's good except for the last 2 letters..too tall
soof - add something to the o's
here's some shit...haven't finished yet.
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jers thats sweet
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jers nice ish i dont have ne suggestions
Urb Pirate- cool style really tech
Cerex- simple and bubbly looks good
Base- lose the arrows but its starting to look good
Akshun- Silver and the Gold look good arounf it, good style, funny chin,
Soof- pretty good
Jers One- Thats sick i really like it
Dark- too small
my first attempt..crits?
thnx for the crits
soof-mos def put somethin to make them look like o's work on the f and make all bars in the s the same width itd look better that way
ark-get that outline steady and move ur letters closer together but i like the style of letters dope style
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lose the stripes and and make the s more like an s
I was gonna post this in normal books but I figured Id get bitched at because I dont have enough arrows
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syrup thats sweet
and los like syrup said lose the strips
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crits? and sorry bout it being small my web cam is retarded
Ugh.. Someone told me to put stripes in it to see how it would look.
Syrup, I dont know how it doesnt look like an S.
Los- id suggest u get a better name cuz S's seem hard for u. and three letter names aint the easiest to work with
syrup- i have no idea what to say
dark- maybe add a 3-d, use bars if u didnt
I know how to do an S.
Slushi (Brother) told me to do that S.
Akshun- Lose some arrows.
If you dont like my crit. Sorry but i dont know much.
intaout - bars
los - LOS <--- USE those
syrup - not bad not bad , i cant think of something to change right now tho
akshun - simples
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Very nice dawsek
akshun- the force field is shit lose it! and add some flow!
dawsex - not feelin bottom of ur s infact ur S needs lil work.
AND WILL TOYS STOP FUCKING COMMENTING, ON SHIT THEY DONT KNOW ABOUT! JUST POST FOR THE SAKE OFF FUCKING POSTING!
gotta bump that shit, dope as hell, love thw wilds piece
daws-d looks like an o
akshun- fuck lookin the arrows, work on those letters, and forget about the arrows
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