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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    alright sorry but i just read the crits and needed to get this off my chest.

    which style do yall prefer and what style shall i continue with..


    ths LA Cali stype shit..

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    or my old style..

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    or shall i mix them ?
    major props to yall who give me a lil bit off feedback.
    thanks.


    ----crits----

    Tense...god damn man...i want you to take all that shit talking you did to me back.

    cyto...iono man...its looks good at first sight..then you pull away those addons and you can see the letters aint really that good...sorry.
     
  2. xKAPTIVx

    xKAPTIVx Member

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    amk - i like the new style, if you can pull off the details of the letters it would look really nice.
     
  3. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  4. awormiscoming

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  6. SOOF

    SOOF Senior Member

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    amk: i like the originals,your old style
    awormiscoming:not bad, it has potential
    tense:all yur letters are off

    toy throw thread is dead, so im psting here, crits?
    ai150.photobucket.com_albums_s84_danyel0228_09_02_07_1743.jpg
     
  7. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  8. ORIGIN IX

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  9. sKeeLo

    sKeeLo Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/689/1252575im0.jpg

    posted this earlier and people didnt like it but i was really feeling it so im posting it larger so u can see . . . . i normally dont like my stuff but i was really feeling this BLADE, too bad i had to give it away . .

    whahappen - for your R i would do what you did on the top loop part of your A instaed of that roundy thing . . plus triangles like on your A are easier to paint . . .
     
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  10. alive

    alive Banned

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    easily some of the best ever from u i think. its gorgeous. old school feel. who the fuck didnt like it. btw i saw mine if u didnt see my comment, its great! i cant wait. thanks again!
     
  11. Smae

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    2 other sketches:
    aa564.ac_images.myspacecdn.com_images01_90_l_39f8a1b3a2750ed71aa99cb3a0367b83.png (about 5 mins)

    aa556.ac_images.myspacecdn.com_images01_90_l_f2cb9921068a1326d85d5ea17876350b.png (about 2 mins)
     
  12. xKAPTIVx

    xKAPTIVx Member

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    not feeling the second one...
    neither the first one, maybe if you work on it a bit
     
  13. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    afc01.deviantart.com_fs20_i_2007_245_0_4_Book_Burning_by_SUMOE.jpg
    Kinda gay, I'll prolly finish it, maybe not...
     
  14. ORIGIN IX

    ORIGIN IX Member

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    skeelo, the purple one on the right is mad nice. left one is hard to read (for me hehe)
     
  15. whahappen?

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  16. shred til ur dead

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    smae i think ur first one is okay the letters could use some work like the bubbles getting smaller or whatever shouldnt like substitute for the actual lines of the letter the second one im diggin ur s but the rest of the letters dont match it id say loose the things comin out of the bottom of the m dont make the crossbar of the a loop around into the right bar and for the e instead of having the middle bar squiggle around just make it a full bar

    thats all just in my opinion though :]

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    a simple with 3-d

    crits?
     
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  17. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    at first i thought this was done on the computer. nice colouring job
     
  18. Sou - Mvd

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  19. awormiscoming

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    I have to agree, real hot shit.
     
  20. BIGel

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    afc02.deviantart.com_fs20_i_2007_246_d_c_tower_by_bigel.jpg

    found a lost book today with some oldies in it!

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