alright sorry but i just read the crits and needed to get this off my chest. which style do yall prefer and what style shall i continue with.. ths LA Cali stype shit.. View attachment 300521 View attachment 300522 View attachment 300523 or my old style.. View attachment 300524 View attachment 300525 View attachment 300526 or shall i mix them ? major props to yall who give me a lil bit off feedback. thanks. ----crits---- Tense...god damn man...i want you to take all that shit talking you did to me back. cyto...iono man...its looks good at first sight..then you pull away those addons and you can see the letters aint really that good...sorry.
amk - i like the new style, if you can pull off the details of the letters it would look really nice.
amk dope crits on the attempt [Broken External Image]:http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/1994/picture016cc5.jpg or discuss the epic fucking win of what im currently eating [Broken External Image]:http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/1607/epicwinav8.jpg
amk: i like the originals,your old style awormiscoming:not bad, it has potential tense:all yur letters are off toy throw thread is dead, so im psting here, crits?
some sketches these r some things ive been drawing/sketching, only its not a black book ^.^ its a yellow book i found in my room. [Broken External Image]:http://img475.imageshack.us/img475/1807/sketching2001hd8.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/474/sketching3001xf3.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/6619/sketching5001zw5.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/6677/sketching6002ah1.th.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img355.imageshack.us/img355/3328/sketching1001uz5.th.jpg have been doing sketches like these for about 3 months(when i started "writing") critique ifu wanna
[Broken External Image]:http://img482.imageshack.us/img482/689/1252575im0.jpg posted this earlier and people didnt like it but i was really feeling it so im posting it larger so u can see . . . . i normally dont like my stuff but i was really feeling this BLADE, too bad i had to give it away . . whahappen - for your R i would do what you did on the top loop part of your A instaed of that roundy thing . . plus triangles like on your A are easier to paint . . .
easily some of the best ever from u i think. its gorgeous. old school feel. who the fuck didnt like it. btw i saw mine if u didnt see my comment, its great! i cant wait. thanks again!
smae i think ur first one is okay the letters could use some work like the bubbles getting smaller or whatever shouldnt like substitute for the actual lines of the letter the second one im diggin ur s but the rest of the letters dont match it id say loose the things comin out of the bottom of the m dont make the crossbar of the a loop around into the right bar and for the e instead of having the middle bar squiggle around just make it a full bar thats all just in my opinion though :] [Broken External Image]:http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/2408/dscn0217em4.jpg a simple with 3-d crits?