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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. enjoys_art

    enjoys_art Member

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  2. alive

    alive Banned

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    start over, do block letteres, dont do backgrounds, dont use color. dont do fills. dont do effects. plain fucking letters. and get a better pic.
     
  3. Bastardo

    Bastardo Senior Member

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  4. alive

    alive Banned

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    love it, u wanna do an exchange? maybe even, (if ur comfortable with it, i understand otherwise) physical? like actually sending it?
     
  5. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    thats a long exchange nyc to the white folks mother land.
     
  6. Bastardo

    Bastardo Senior Member

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  7. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Yoooooo, Bastardo. We have an exchange from like a year ago, and I don't think either of us did them... Wanna exchange now that our styles have progressed?

    By the way that "G" is dooooope.
     
  8. Bastardo

    Bastardo Senior Member

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    Sure thing! will be up later :)
    Mers
     
  9. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    I might have yours on Tuesday or Wednesday...I work realllllllll slow. Especially with this more complicated shit I'm trying.

    But yeah, I'll have it up when I'm done.
     
  10. Roolete

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  11. alive

    alive Banned

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    go simpler. 8:30 is late night?
     
  12. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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    last night at like 6 am.u think simpler? aaawww, i liked that one.
    another one from last night
    View attachment 300847
     
  13. alive

    alive Banned

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    that reminds me of CHEU. but is vry nice. dope simple style.
     
  14. jersOneTIC

    jersOneTIC Senior Member

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  15. Drakula

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    Like 80% of that is dope jers.But there's a few things in it that ruin it man.On that top one the top of the R is just one straight line down and it looks really pointy compared to the rest of the piece.Also the middle bar of the S is too straight down and looks more like a backwards Z.On the second one the The right leg of the R really needs some sorting out,too fat.And both of them need proportion adjustments.There's alot of lumps and thick to thin bits.Other than that though it's real good.
     
  16. thesilentvandal

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  17. Sumoe

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    Way too much "inspiration" from Mers.
     
  18. kelio

    kelio Senior Member

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    sKeeLo: i love the old school feel to it.
    Smae: if you want critz take the time to make your sketch decent.
    Sumoe: damn thats so dope. love the s.
    whahappen?: thats so dope love to see it in some color.
    BIGel: love your style so crisp.
    HoodRichSucka: the extensions off of your letters are too long.
    Seek139: maybe bring your letters closer.
    Bastardo: i would love to do an exchange, maybe once i get better.
    Roolete: keep doing what you like, cause im fellin both. maybe lose some of the drip bubble things off of the cher sketch.
    thesilentvandal: all of the sketches you do are the same i meen its dope but maybe try something different. like mess with your letters or something.

    just working on my style and new letters. critz please.
    ai181.photobucket.com_albums_x108_hoop_blah_Drawing0012.jpg
     
  19. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    BECAUSE IT'S A BLATANT BITE...
    The "W" and the "S" are pretty much exactly the same, and the "A" is very similar. It's okay to get inspiration, but biting isn't.

    Edit: I'm assuming YOU did the "DAWSE" in your signature on Vandal Squad or something. That style is nothing like the shit you're doing now. Why is that? Why don't you try to develop the other style more and stop biting Mers?

    EDIT AGAIN:
    [Broken External Image]:http://img212.imageshack.us/img212/9255/stuff025ga2.jpg
    ^^NOT MINE, BASTARDO, A.K.A. MERS' WORK/SKETCH
     
    Last edited: Sep 3, 2007
  20. sKeeLo

    sKeeLo Senior Member

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    jers not bad, first one has extensions that seem to come from nowhere, aka not connected to the bars/letters whic ive never been a fan off . . also your Es seem to be tooclose and overlapped by the J . . 1000 % agree with drak that that top triangle/edgy thing in yuuor R looks akward

    silent vandal - i like it would love to have a page or 2 from u in 1 of my bboks . . top maybe had too much of a proportion difference btw the thin and thick bars (even thoo that appears to be the style they still look too unproportional)

    roolete/kelio - i would get a better understanding of the basics/simples before tryin more abstract letters/styles