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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. C-SONE

    C-SONE Senior Member

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  2. in_the_red

    in_the_red Senior Member

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    librelikespie, you're studying an awesome book. I know that's not very helpful.

    C-sone, I like your last sketch the best, but the E looks a bit funny - leans to the right too much I think. Other than that, the letter structure is really good.

    silentchaos, your bars need to be fatter and you need to make sure they're not shakey - they kinda go skinnier and fatter and it's obviously not on purpose.
     
  3. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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    silentchaos - id say try to keep it consistent. Keep he widths of the top bars roughly the same, etc.
    phenom5 - your letter structure needs some work, but your colour choices are good
    c-sone - your stuff's dope!

    ish i sketched just now
    ai160.photobucket.com_albums_t175_mud_aura_img020.jpg
     
  4. NEOZ

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  5. Stonk

    Stonk Senior Member

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    people need to remember to give out critz..people are sucking awfully hard on that aspect.

    anyway.. neoz i really like that second one. if you added a shadow on those letters i would really like it.

    librelikespi - that reminds of a shel silverstein book haha. anyway i cant' really read it..whats it say?
     
  6. c.n.k

    c.n.k Member

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    libre-use bars...simples...make your letters more clearer.
    ai116.photobucket.com_albums_o6_pokoman_IMG_0967.jpg
     
  7. nero122

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  8. mum

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  9. sky_one

    sky_one Senior Member

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    hey i dont apere here for a while heres some shit its about 2 months old this sketch ive emproved alot more later il pute the new shit i did ...chanxed my tag to made
    ai191.photobucket.com_albums_z270_sky_oner_fatpens.jpg_103b725759af98eb6f3839564ca4366b.jpg
    p.s all your sketches on this page are dope big ups
     
  10. Stonk

    Stonk Senior Member

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    GIVE FUCKING CRITS EVERYONE! do not complain when you don't recieve any when you post.

    CNK..nice shit, real clean. though i would make the 2 side even ..i dont like how the left is higher than the right.

    Nero..i cant tell what it says..but i do like the colors:p

    mum..im feelin that style . not so much the d on the second one though

    Made simplify that down some..looks like your using decent bars kinda but you went crazy with extensions.
     
  11. nero122

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  12. Mello

    Mello Senior Member

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    to be fair my inexperienced eyes couldnt read it either
     
  13. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    Nero...reminds me of Hepos man
     
  14. nero122

    nero122 Elite Member

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  15. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    EXACTLY. the extentions, addons and all.
     
  16. S8nt

    S8nt Senior Member

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    ai221.photobucket.com_albums_dd101_bomballnite_IMG_0785.jpg

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    ai221.photobucket.com_albums_dd101_bomballnite_IMG_0787.jpg ^copied from a book before anyone jumps on my dick about it i was just trying out some new prismas
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  17. nero122

    nero122 Elite Member

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    hepos 's' don't look nothing like mine i didn't bite him i just spent allot of time developing a style that i liked so w/e if you think i bite him then whatever
    we'll ask him if he thinks im biting him
     
  18. nero122

    nero122 Elite Member

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    bumpin so yall see it unedited so you dont gotsta swith teh pages yeahhh
     
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