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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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  2. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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  3. Fixion

    Fixion Senior Member

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    Haven't been here for awhile. Well here's my stuff, feedback would be appreciated
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    Penticles, not pentagrams.
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    For my friend.
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    Again, penticles.


    Popshots-Nice simples. Keep it up.
    Ego 905, fr3gna-Start simple.
    SEIZE-Nice shiz. Diggin the throwies especially. What markers are those on the last one?
    Rots-Effin ill. It's on a digital graff game too, LAWLZ.
    Nez-The character's nice but your letters, ehhh. Your Z looks like a 2.
    Borg-That ALE is brutal.
    SEZER-Handies are sexy as fuh.
    Atlok-I say, still do simples. Like your handy though.

    There's my crits for yall. Mind giving me a lil feedback yo?
     
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  4. Sick!

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    [Broken External Image]:http://widget.slide.com/rdr/1/1/3/W/6000000111a5fb9/1/250/E0Yna-CU7z9ulmPIkYQ6fXjWr1SUn6Sv.jpg
    updated throwie.....
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    and another one......yes i know i need to fix the fucked 's'

    atlok...i might be blind but that t looks like from the video game
    ccc-lovin fuck swoe mind if i contribute?
    popshots-dont do stickers yet the better writers unlike us need those but just work on stucture
    ego-no beef but quit or start over with new name everything then go bigger and dont color yet
    haze- i agree with nez
     
  5. dim

    dim Elite Member

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    tezer do you want to do a straight ltter exchange ? i write dimr
     
  6. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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    im down ill post it up toomooorow.
     
  7. SEIZE [reppin yo hood]

    SEIZE [reppin yo hood] Elite Member

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    only the blue sketch is mine. and i used prismas
     
  8. 5Funerals

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    Yo Frost - I like the old throwie much better, just get the S up to par, lose the arrow, and make the first arm of the T visible so you can tell what letter it is. Also, I dont think you know what you are talking about when it comes to Aflos stickahs. Aflo's got nice stylish simple letters that work perfectly on a sticker. No disrespect just disagreement.
     
  9. RFI. SPit

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  10. Fixion

    Fixion Senior Member

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    Bumps to new page.
     
  11. Sick!

    Sick! Senior Member

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    buump sorry only one crit thanks 5funerals need more
    also at bottom of last page makin new page i think..
    i just dont like aslos shit for some reason... i dont know

    fixion-looks mad dope keep workin on that girl tho its got potential
     
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  12. 5Funerals

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    ZofOne and Byble sick shit!

    New throwup style
    ai105.photobucket.com_albums_m223_ShanestaGangsta_53400019.jpg
     
  13. atlok7

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    byble- i like the second one and the very last the best. the other seem kinda goofy. the very last red and orange and tht grey throwie are simply dope
     
  14. jersOneTIC

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  15. hazetheone

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    3d is a little off
    but im diggin it man
    goodwork
     
  16. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  17. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    i think its time to start doing different things. ive been seeing the same stuff from you for like 3 months...
     
  18. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  19. kosher

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    zof it's cool. letter structure could be a bit better but i really like the gradient on the 3d.
    fixion, i like the 2nd and 3rd ones. i like the drawings used in the 3rd one. 2nd one you gotta pick whether or not you fill in the white middle space with the highlite color for the whole piece, can't pick and chose (i'm refering to how in the b's it's all pink but in the e there's white)
    sick, your letters are too scrunched and your t looks weird. also if you're gonna do blockbuster, keep it straight, don't let it curve upwards.
    5funerals, it's really nice, i think it's just slightly abstract as far as the shapes of the letters go. if you could keep it more uniform i'd like it more but it's personal opinion.
    jers, gorgeous piece, skyline looks good, street looks ugly. if you're gonna do something like that use perspective and a vanishing point just like you would with your letters.
    sex, i don't really like it for graffiti. letters seem too skinny and stuff i don't know. the structure could make for some sick characters though.

    just a sketch i did in pencil today instead of paying attention to english and math in the afternoon. i think i made the right decision. i fucked up the r, no need to tell me that. i was just trying the bubbles, don't really know if i'm feeling how they turned out. PLEASE let me know what you think, crits are welcomed with open arms. thanks.

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  20. kosher

    kosher Senior Member

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    sorry double post. if a mod wants to delete this, go for it
     
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