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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    cant wait to see it bro, gonna be sick (atlok)

    oh i didnt give crits... i love the c, and the s...mah faaaav...the only thing thats wrong is the bar on the first A, its curved wich i didnt notice at first glance, it still flows but a straight bar would be better
     
  2. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    yo ante. thanks brua. ha your signature is tight, im listening to that album right now
     
  3. OfesOfor

    OfesOfor Senior Member

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    resized and darkend lines

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  4. hazetheone

    hazetheone Elite Member

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    the r is covering too much of the e and the s is a little thin
     
  5. OfesOfor

    OfesOfor Senior Member

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    yeah e is kind of weak
    thanks bro
     
  6. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    cais-im fucking in love with your 'S', 3d, and extentions.

    camer- i like where your style is going, but i think you should experiment a little more now that you have a feeling for where youre going. just dont go overboard.

    Reos-you've got something going, mess with the s and r a little, with the r in particular, im not too keen on how the left leg gets fatter as it goes down, reminds me of bellbottom jeans and im not a fan of those either. the top of the s is kind of odd, and im not sure about the skinny line in the middle quite yet, maybe if you mess with the top, the middle part would fit.
     
  7. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    Haze i like the style with the word aint seen it like that yet lookin pretty dope
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    another pen character today crits? workin a realistic style
     
  8. Xyk

    Xyk Senior Member

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    BUMP FOR THE THIRD FUCKIN TIME WITH NO CRITS. FUCKIN CRIT THE GUYS ABOVE YOU AIGHT?

    Evade - Interesting charac, perhaps try giving it some shades or something.


    Camer - That looks alright. the middle of the M could use spme work imo.

    Ofes ofor - looking good, but the 3d looks really fcked
     
  9. OfesOfor

    OfesOfor Senior Member

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    - its not 3d .. its more of a semi background
     
  10. Panda Jerk

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  11. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    You should try out some [​IMG]
     
  12. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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  13. Dying to live

    Dying to live Senior Member

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    the L looks like a G and the K looks like it has down syndrome

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    trying extensions cause my piece looked to plain whatcha thinkkkks?
     
  14. Xyk

    Xyk Senior Member

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    Leski - Thanks for actually critting before asking for them. I reaelly like the E, but im having trouble telling what the last letter is.

    Akel - That looks pretty solid, marker and color that one.
     
  15. Desipher

    Desipher Guest

    those lil dots remind me of the ish i rock on mine
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  16. Rambooboo

    Rambooboo Senior Member

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    you should color that it would look dope
     
  17. Dying to live

    Dying to live Senior Member

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  18. Panda Jerk

    Panda Jerk Elite Member

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  19. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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    Alright, I'll keep working on it.
    The I and K need a lot of work yet to fit in with the GES... the GES still needs more tweaking... I'll post some more of it in a few days.

    The first letter is a G, not a L, thats why it looks like a G. ;)

    Vibe; Ditch all but the black and white one. Its pretty good. Keep working on that style and keep its single colours for now.
    Green fill, black outline, green force field, ext.
     
  20. Desipher

    Desipher Guest

    ya dying to live its all good man just thot id point it out :p probly wont ever finish that sketch lol