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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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  2. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    akel, that looks good. maybe bring out the left arrow a bit more so its super smhexi? im just tryin to find something to crit.. haha

    vibe, im diggin the first one work on the B, bring it down a bit. and the last one has potential if its worked on

    xyk - it looks good, i like the use of paralellograms? if thats what the crooked rectangle shape is called. keep it up

    atlok - ive got no crits for you my friend, but the question is.. do you have crits for me? haha

    anyways, heres my shitty shit shit.
    [Broken External Image]:http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/3902/bels13az8.jpg

    on another topic, i got my results for my GED exam and i passed with flying colors. i did better than 90% of highschool graduates according to my wack grading sheet.
     
  3. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    atlok..some of the little doodads are overused..like the little Inline Square things...it kinda confuses yah..also all the little lone dots..there are far too many...just do one straight full peice with jus one outline then we can see what your letters are really like. :)

    This WAS the peice i was gonna do for MENTE...but its pretty darn whack for the best writers on this fucking whole forum...so ima do a new one...anyways jus posting it so i aint flickless

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  4. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    jet pack- l like that style. mabie if u outlined it in black pen and colo0red it it would b sweeter
     
  5. Drakula

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    Vibe the first and last are aight.I say stick to them for a while.

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    Haven't tryed anything too complex in a while so I put some work into this outline.Might get back into this sort of style but ill still be rocking that simple shit.I dunno about everyone else but I sort of prefer nice bubbley funky pieces that dont need arrows or extensions.
     
  6. JETPACK!!

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    i need to make my shit flow more imo. but whatevs, it'll get there.

    word mass, youve deff done better.. but thats not bad at all, it probably would look a lot better if you finished it.

    drak, thats looking hot, ive always been a fan of similar styles of that. your Rs a bit bigger than the rest an your extensions are tiny imo. but it still looks good
     
  7. There is a deeper meaning

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  9. sketch3

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    Deeper Meaning Dopest Peice Iv Ever Seen, Get Out Of The Toy Forum
     
  10. There is a deeper meaning

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  11. sketch3

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    no its horrible, read the new to graff thread
     
  12. Desipher

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  17. a maze

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    You KNOW this isn't needed, sketch. Give constructive crits, man. :D
     
  18. Chump

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    but it sure was funny lol
     
  19. SCIEnce802

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    i agree...
    but i dont think it could get any worse, so my crit to him is to use block letters...
     
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