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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Xyk

    Xyk Senior Member

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    Fable - thats looking alright, but ur F looks too small in comparison to the otehr letters. Try connectign the top and bottom of the e, and work on the l a bit more

    dim- that looks really good, i love the fill. maybe just lessen up on whats happenin with teh letters, it looks like too much going on in too small a spce.

    Peor - Coloring and 3d if you do it si gonna be a bitch on taht piece haha. i liek it thoh, nice and simple, earthworm idea is cool. maybe if you made it earthworms and cookies or summin, thatd be interesting

    Heres some new stuff, trying out diff backgrounds/colors/styles
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  2. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    dim that piece is fucking illy, all that i would work on is with the r, where the bottom of the loop and the right leg meet, id make em form into one bar as apposed to two. also maybe mess with E's cuz it seems to be your most basic letter.
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  3. Rambooboo

    Rambooboo Senior Member

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    garbage like the style the R on the second one looks like the R sex uses
  4. mxman

    mxman Senior Member

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    Fable- your extension off the F doesn't match your E....Change the left so of a to point out....why is your B rounded?....Why is the top part of the E inward like that? Fix those things and come back.

    dim- now that it's filled i do see that it needs a little work as far as bending your bars but not too much...

    xyk- nice fill, if that's an E at the end, experiment with fixing it up.
  5. a maze

    a maze Banned

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    No it doesn't. -.-
  6. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    it looks nothing like it
  7. Rambooboo

    Rambooboo Senior Member

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    sorry just woke up went back and looked my mistake
  8. LittleWeapon

    LittleWeapon Member

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    garbage down tha way-im diggin the style keep that shyt up

    what cha think?
  9. fr3gna

    fr3gna Member

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    Sick outline little weapon

    new one, crits please : )

  10. acereborn

    acereborn Elite Member

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    ^^ its a good simp, but you might as well do the same forcefield around the entire piece.
  11. Teez-EmM!!!

    Teez-EmM!!! Elite Member

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    dimr make the leg on your r higher up and the bottem bar of ur e the same width as the top
    fregana your letters are to close together spread em apart
    little wepon go a little simpler ur letters are ok tho
    over sick as allways
    fable dont write fable cause there is already a writer that writes that. make ur piece straighter and ur bars stright in stead of diagonal like on ur f
    i need some helpfull critzz on this
  12. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

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    give this dude his props, he's progressing the right way. startin with simples and workin step by step to more advanced stuff. perfect example.

    i wish more of these dudes would follow you...

    keep it up
  13. emokid

    emokid Senior Member

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    POWWW. i ant been on here in a looooooongggg time. this is my 2nd sketch in about 4 months, this explains why i havent progressed at all. PC4PC??//LOL


    over, the e r on the top one needs sortin and the o+v is nicey.
    bottom sketch is nice.
  14. sheltr

    sheltr Senior Member

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    what do z peoplez think?
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  16. hazetheone

    hazetheone Elite Member

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    bumping from a few pages back
    i got nothing
  17. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    bump. only like one cat gave me a crit. guys got ne?

    emo kid- looks sweet
    sheltr- dude in general it looks cool but try splitting letters up so its not one big chunk. and out line in pen and give it a little color.
    dim- nice colors
    little weapon- dude dont worry about extensions right now. it looks like you have alright letters. just work on letters for now.
    fable- kinda cool, but i think the Es a little weak. add some 3d
  18. easer

    easer Member

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    i feel at home
  19. The_NaMEz_BaNKz

    The_NaMEz_BaNKz Elite Member

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    this whole page is filled with sick looksin shit..keeep it up..
  20. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

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    get off that man's nuts

    long as you aint in the same city it dont matter

    haha aint no seriously, its the internet...