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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. roa

    roa Senior Member

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    chump- on the first throw make your C and P like your hum... it looks really sick. and take out the random lines above the right leg bumps.

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  2. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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  3. Cozmo

    Cozmo Senior Member

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    I like 'em both, but I like how you drew the C in the second one. Put that C in the first throw (because the C in the first one might look like an R to some people...and frankly I'd rather be a chump than a rhump ;)) and I think you'll be golden. Maybe put more of a face on the P ghostie so it looks more...Casper-ish...I dunno.

    Good stuff, though...
     
  4. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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    Don't get me wrong i'm a die hard anime fan, from bleach to trinity blood, and every single gundam series, but there's no more originality when drawing manga
     
  5. Chump

    Chump Senior Member

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    Agreed
     
  6. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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  7. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    thanks for the crit guys, and atlok did you mean making a more circular bottom when you said puff, of just wider?
    Atlok-it's damn sick, what exactly do you write because having trouble reading all the letters in it. I love the 3D fill, like to see the inner part filled.
     
  8. OfesOfor

    OfesOfor Senior Member

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  9. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    thanks. i meant like to just make them more blown up like. like wider and more circular at the bottoms.

    ps it reads CAIS
     
  10. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    BUMP!
    OfesOfor - i like the first one alot
    Atlok - Hot shit!!
     
  11. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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  12. Cozmo

    Cozmo Senior Member

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    Evasion, I like the second one. Did you use a ballpoint pen for that? I like the way it looks like Gumby or something. Isn't there some unwritten rule though about putting a crown in your stuff?

    Fube, I especially like the second one. The rabbit ears on the O is cool.

    Hey, everyone, is there a trick to having a really cool tag at the bottom? Do you figure that out the same as you do for your pieces, or is that more whatever you feel like?
     
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  13. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    friend wanted the pic to have a crown (its for his locker) so I threw it in
     
  14. LOPe_GCI

    LOPe_GCI Senior Member

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  15. Chump

    Chump Senior Member

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    lope... looks sick... yet see some color
     
  16. Cozmo

    Cozmo Senior Member

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    Lope, I meant to comment on this earlier. I like it a lot. I like that the letters are readable, but they still look good, and I really dig the head on the I. It's a nice change from people doing spray caps on their I's. Well done. Can't wait to see a coloured version.
     
  17. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    lope-nice shit, cant wait for some color. only crit i guess is the E seems a little top heavy, as in i wouldn't mind the bottom of it being a bit larger and the top a little smaller.
    new throwie, crit please
    *ADJUSTMENTS MADE*
     
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  18. beyondyereyes

    beyondyereyes Senior Member

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  19. Chump

    Chump Senior Member

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    first try on kinda 3d...lol
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    A name im messing with....
    Crits suggestion?
    Agony? im lovin the style...i dont like the upside cross most of the time but it looks dope on that A...
     
  20. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    ehhhh agony not feeling it so much, seems it's missing flow. Thanks for the crit.
    Jinx-Nice stuff man, the J doesn't work so great in the first one.
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