what about the character

 

haha, i'm kind of feeling it. has a funny vibe. the shadow on the speech bubble is way off, though.

 

i say ditch the S, M and R

 

new character.

new piece.
not feeling the r cause it looks like the p
is it better though?

 

the curly things on the P and R bug me.

 

keep working on it
stay in the books

 

i know ima wicked toy
i just started like 3 weeks ago
need some crit.....dont be to harsh

 

k everybody but moze needs to learn somethin important for BS ...GIVE CRITS TO GET EM!!
Therefore only mose deserves crits, dude try droppin the middle part of the E and you'll have some killer simples on your hands
now that thats been established heres a slap and some backgrounds for future slaps
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crits?

 

nice..

 

eva - those dont belong in this thread. Your simple letters are unproportionate.
Mose - I like it all

 

supreme-a little better, but i'd choose a shorter name if i were you. 7 letters is a lot of letters.
atm-ssssiiiiimmmmmppppplllllleeeeessssss
eva-feelin the purple, black, and green backrounds

here's basically that same sketch, but colored. crits?
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same page bump

 

i do simples all day in class but im not gonna post that shit

 

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grimey.

 

cut that chord on the left side of the O and define the B some more
that F isnt half bad though

 

riot thats pretty tight

 

ahh whatever. idc.
im coloring it now

 

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