then dont post anything. Sex - I dont like the right leg of your A because it doesnt flow with the other letters. You have good style though (as if you havent heard that 10000000000000000 times). Supreme Chris - get better markers. Your character reminds me wayyy to much of toothpaste for dinner. OFB - there is almost no structure in that. You dont have any bars that are relevant to each other and those weird connections dont look very good. Also, loose the extension on the O because it makes no sense at all. The fill isnt very good either and I dont like the dots in the forcefield. MOES - that is soo dope. Burns the whole page.
Sex - that shits pretty fresh, i love your filling and style. OFB - I like the F but thats pretty much it, you should have made the line in the middle of the B look less like a little slime thing. Moes - Gave ya crits on sbc but, its pretty dope to me, loving the fill but the middle line of the e seems crooked, it looks better than before but it still sort of bothers me.
Remos-stay simple like me brotha. when u hurry it turns out bad. sex cool throws as always. hard to crit the same stuff over and over. but your good people and its a cool style to stick with. anyway, the top shitty flick is for the battle but im not feelin it. might try again. the next was a word of a different battle but i like the letters so much i did a few. debating on changein up my shit. i know im hoein out these flix and im sore u nukkas are sick of seein em, but i like them and i want REAL crits on them. destroy me. View attachment 353586 View attachment 353587 View attachment 353588 View attachment 353589
on the last sketch the shadow on the left bar of the U is messed up but all your sketches are on point. i like the 1st and 2nd the most
Fube - you're killin except for that last one. its good, but a bit too hectic, just clean up the o and the last r , and that'd be best kind too. Remos - work on that R and the M, and itd be a decent throwie... Hiphop - please stop...ill give you some good advice somebody gave me about a month ago..they work so well..SIMPLES! Riot - not feeling it at all SEZ AND MOZE KILLL! sex, your style is one of the most original ive ever seen
bump to new page. fube, those are all dope as hell, especially the second. super funky. and hiphop, the first is alright, just fix the O.
Moes- Looks great. Pretty simple. But what did u do to put the white glimmer? I use a thin paint white deco color but it sux. U got to keep going over it or it will just dissapear. Did this just a min ago. Hurried up on the stars thats why they are so crooked. [Broken External Image]:http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k303/lil_boxer09/03-16-08_1604.jpg
i ment like some thing help full. like somthing that u notice that maybe the writer wouldnt necicarly notice