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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
...ewww...That, I'm sorry doesn't look like my stuff....is that crayon?
This is the new to graff thread.
that guy wasn't asking you if you were.
I dont know what it is.
But we dont need to get into my olden days.
Cuz the past is the past, and you can't beat me now so.
pay some dues, put in some work.
keep it simple and it will progress naturaly.
u should go through at least 3 sketch books before u get something u like.
rotten keepin the page alive!
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I'm not dissin' you, I mean you're probably good now, but I don't see the resemblance sorry.
And I've been on here a while, I've read a lot of stuff before posting. I've ton simples for 4 months now. and I've posted stuff just like the stuff I just posted. And they just said it was ok, I just need to thicken bars, and make them all the same size. Which I did.
dont make them poke out n shit
man, this is not a math problem, theres no 100% way of going about it. face it, when u started this shit u thought u could get it down in about a month of workin on it. but this shit is gunna take some dedication. a lot of this your just gunna have to figure out for yourself man. anything that is said in this forum is strictly someones opnion. but u need to look at your own shit and crit it before u post up here.
i love you.
The 3d needs work, consistent bars, and cleaner lines my friend. The char is kinda messy as well. Keep at it.
This is hot. Very nice work.
3 is wayyyyy too low of a number of sketchbooks
Dude read the fuckin' words.
Thats from when I first started.
Fube- always love everything you do man.
that first one definetly says wage......
fube- have you painted anything yet?
another simple, trying to work out that flow
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rots and fube, looking good
TARE..better but keep the R staight...also the t could extend into the A imo, if u wanted
roas, nice and simple but u need to organize the silver highlights (inside the letters) a litte more
tare- put a space inbewteen that R.s legs(?) itll flow more
roas- the top part of the s should be smaller than the bottom imo and think of highlights as light shining on something...it shouldnt shine from all angles
fube-i like your style and haha mesn i agree 3 is still way too little
capo...i know its a pain in the ass but the new to graff thread does help
some of my more recent stuff:
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ugh stupid scanner bit off the top a bit...oh well
oh and i know my hands a bit blah on the top there... i just wanted to write something there haha...it seemed like a good idea at 4 in the morning
i have, im not much for pieceing but i hit chill walls. getting into benching as of late but the yards are pretty heated with beef on rights to paint. i dont feel like getting my head bashed in over some yard.
i try to make sure i can paint anything i put on paper tho. its workin pretty good.
maste- try not to over lap your letters so much. also, fills dont make letters, letters should always come first, id rather see a nice hollow simple then a sick fill on horrible letters. keep at it.
thanks for the crits guys
The AGE doesn't really work, theres no flow
but I like the SIVLIZED, I dont know if you intentionally left out an I (so it would say SIVILIZED) but I like it except that you should make the ZEand D the same size as the rest ofyour letters.
ok heres the same peice but with some bubbles
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and I intentionally made the R bend but if you guys think it'd flow better I'll straighten it out
oh and FUBE you got flicks of your painted stuff?
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