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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    On?
     
  2. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    ...ewww...That, I'm sorry doesn't look like my stuff....is that crayon?
     
  3. knewsince.

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  4. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    pay some dues, put in some work.

    keep it simple and it will progress naturaly.

    u should go through at least 3 sketch books before u get something u like.

    rotten keepin the page alive!

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  5. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    I'm not dissin' you, I mean you're probably good now, but I don't see the resemblance sorry.

    And I've been on here a while, I've read a lot of stuff before posting. I've ton simples for 4 months now. and I've posted stuff just like the stuff I just posted. And they just said it was ok, I just need to thicken bars, and make them all the same size. Which I did.
     
  6. knewsince.

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    dont make them poke out n shit
     
  7. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    man, this is not a math problem, theres no 100% way of going about it. face it, when u started this shit u thought u could get it down in about a month of workin on it. but this shit is gunna take some dedication. a lot of this your just gunna have to figure out for yourself man. anything that is said in this forum is strictly someones opnion. but u need to look at your own shit and crit it before u post up here.
     
  8. knewsince.

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  9. Fube

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  10. b SQUARED 08

    b SQUARED 08 Senior Member

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    The 3d needs work, consistent bars, and cleaner lines my friend. The char is kinda messy as well. Keep at it.

    This is hot. Very nice work.
     
  11. MESN[905]

    MESN[905] Senior Member

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    eh

    3 is wayyyyy too low of a number of sketchbooks
     
  12. knewsince.

    knewsince. Senior Member

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    Dude read the fuckin' words.
    Thats from when I first started.
     
  13. OfesOfor

    OfesOfor Senior Member

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    Fube- always love everything you do man.
     
  14. roa

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  15. OfesOfor

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    that first one definetly says wage......
     
  16. Cyto Aka Son1c

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  17. PureSole

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    rots and fube, looking good
    TARE..better but keep the R staight...also the t could extend into the A imo, if u wanted
    roas, nice and simple but u need to organize the silver highlights (inside the letters) a litte more
     
  18. Maste

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    tare- put a space inbewteen that R.s legs(?) itll flow more
    roas- the top part of the s should be smaller than the bottom imo and think of highlights as light shining on something...it shouldnt shine from all angles
    fube-i like your style and haha mesn i agree 3 is still way too little
    capo...i know its a pain in the ass but the new to graff thread does help

    some of my more recent stuff:
    [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/407/age001pe4.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/6761/sivlized003kf1.jpg
    ugh stupid scanner bit off the top a bit...oh well

    crits please
    oh and i know my hands a bit blah on the top there... i just wanted to write something there haha...it seemed like a good idea at 4 in the morning
     
  19. Fube

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    i have, im not much for pieceing but i hit chill walls. getting into benching as of late but the yards are pretty heated with beef on rights to paint. i dont feel like getting my head bashed in over some yard.

    i try to make sure i can paint anything i put on paper tho. its workin pretty good.

    maste- try not to over lap your letters so much. also, fills dont make letters, letters should always come first, id rather see a nice hollow simple then a sick fill on horrible letters. keep at it.
     
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  20. Cyto Aka Son1c

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    thanks for the crits guys

    maste-

    The AGE doesn't really work, theres no flow
    but I like the SIVLIZED, I dont know if you intentionally left out an I (so it would say SIVILIZED) but I like it except that you should make the ZEand D the same size as the rest ofyour letters.

    ok heres the same peice but with some bubbles
    [Broken External Image]:http://img357.imageshack.us/img357/9541/dscn0262gs1.jpg



    and I intentionally made the R bend but if you guys think it'd flow better I'll straighten it out


    oh and FUBE you got flicks of your painted stuff?