yea the i is left out cause i wrote sivl first and then added the ized and the zed are smaller cause i was running outta room on the paper haha i like the bubbles now just go rewrite it with w/e crits you got and yea i forgot where i was goin with this
my computer crashed an all i got is the whack older stuff. but i dont like to post a bunch of my painted stuff. personal reasons. why do u ask? also, the only over laping letter u got there is the r, throws the shit off.
Dude I've been doing it 4-5 months, and I sucked I know, I never thought it'd take a month. And I'm truely dedicated, but that piece I did, I really, honestly liked it, and also it met the standards, or so I thought, of the people given me advice about it. I did one before and they said thicken the bars, well I did, then added my flair, and I like it. I know it's someone's opinion, but hey, help from experienced writers, help a lot. I know I suck, which is why I posted my stuff. But now I'm confused why people dislike it, since it seem's pretty good.
View attachment 353727 Tare, Good stuff Maste, The first one, the E's bottom leg is way too far out, and it's the only one curved like that. Roas, nice. Probably finish later tonight, just bored and trying different things.
Idk I was interested in seeing your shit on a wall and how well you make the transition of writing on paper to walls.. yeah the R was intentional I try that peice again and fix the r oh I see, I hate running out of room
thanks man, and i like your peice I just can't make out the letters, im stoned off my ass but umm is it.. K R D?
not many crits i can give that yall aint herd before. added highlights View attachment 353764 another simple with a fill, sence i never seem to do them. View attachment 353765
Fube- Loving the fills and highlights tried to fix the R but messed up the other letters in the process, so kinda sloppy but w/e last flick for the nite [Broken External Image]:http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/2336/dscn0266du2.jpg
tare, thats the same shit. the secret to simples is make EVERYTHING the same. if u end a letter flat, dont bevel something else. your t overlaps your a and fucked your 3d. too much empty space. to me drop shadow 3d looks the best on simps. dont worry about all the bubbles and add ons here. work on your thickness, try to be PERFECT. if u start a sketch and fuck up. dont finish it, fuckin start all over. till u get it. [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v330/fubar976/th_S6300879.jpg even my thickness is fucked up. but theres a touch of style in it i guess so ill be ok. keep workin.
AEK-It's too hip-hop, lose the arrows, make the bars the same size, and work on the N and U cyto- nice start, keep it up
You've seen it three times because I posted it, changed it, and reposted it, and then I only got one crit. I'm trying to get other opinions as well. Thank you, by the way. The colour is in progress.