oh ok... well looks like a nautical star
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other than clean your lines up alil... i like it...

 

chump, still sick man, add colors.
from a while ago. (2 weeks into graff)

 

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CRITS?,yea...SAYS AIR
tare-keep the simples, doin good, but on the paint splatters, change em up they dont have to be teh same pattern.
aek-rock simples, try what tare is doin, you'll get there.
cosmo-i like it, im not so sure why.
dino-you got the right idea, but keep the letters seperate for a while

 

AIR-sick stuff man, and ya thanks, it was a while ago, but now i keep everything seperated.

 

bump for crits

 

crit to get crits...

 

Dino, I like the spider webs. It's got the old-school Spiderman feel to it. Question, though...how easy would it be to actually spray that up on a wall?

 

Supreme you need to work on your letters and the handy on that tag. try to not have as much space between the letters.

 

bumping from a looong way back. Hadn't been on since my other acc. was bannded.

 

for the love of god..try new letters !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and say when you get banned yea....you dont make a new account and post again....you serve you e-time like a real writer !

 

NO MORREEEE BEEEEEFFFF, we all must become like vegetarians, start having tofu and shit...

 

Real writers don't do e-time... Hahaha


but yeah, beef is for carnivores.

 

who said anything about beef ?
my lord.
beef is when i call your shit meaningless stuff

Wtf with beef anyway
its a forum ! :winkys: :wub:

 

BEEF BUMPIN...WELL NOT BEEF BUT, ANYWHO...CRITS

 

Why do all the people keep getting banned???



CALZE (crits?)

MAR- I like it, But the color in the 3d kind of don't work with the ones in the fill.
Supreme- I'm not really feeling it. try simpler bars.
Air- looks pretty cool. nice style but it should have less of those sharp things.
Dino- it's okay I guess just get some stuff in proportion.
Cozmo- that's pretty cool with the bricks. Good for a third piece.

 

The webs themself? Not long, i wouldn't think, just use a thin cap and it's easy.

 

some quick fill cause i was lazy to color...in my mini blackbook

 

definetly diggin this!

 

sweet, thanks for the bump. look u crit hungry fools. the most problems i see in this forum is u fools are following the wrong path for faster development. graffiti is the art of letters. so in turn u MUST master the basics of the letter form. u cant go out and buy your 20 dollar black book and bust wild style like heads that been in the game for 20+ years. just like u cant pick up a base ball bat and start playing with the pros. start out with some T-ball, home in on your skills, play in the minors, then maybe, just maybe u will go pro. t-ball for graffiti is simples. get it?

so, get on your computer, look at good SIMPLES and try to hit that shit right. simple fills, simple letters, simple path to the complacated shit. once u get your simples perfect, flex them, bend them, experiment with them. wild style will come naturaly after that.