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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Animal

    Animal Senior Member

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    Hiser, your last one looks nice but the piece is whack.
     
  2. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    just messin' with my name Capo, this one is Cap...

    BMS-NICE, love it...
    capital-LOVE the stickers, the only thing I don't like is how you pick just one random letter or extension and don't close it off but just scribble the fill out, so its not a closed outline letter, but still those are dope as hell.
    Hiser-I like 1st and 3rd, the middle one is too many extensions and complexity, a little eye annoying.

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  3. hiser

    hiser Member

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    none taken.
    any ideas to help?

    thanks by the way.
     
  4. Animal

    Animal Senior Member

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    Capo- i know you probably won't, but don't ever write cap. also, it doesn't look like you are using bars, use them.

    Edit: Hiser- one thing you could do to fix your piece is keep it simple and don't use extensions just yet.
     
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  5. trowel

    trowel Senior Member

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    man i dont mean to be a hater but this is the one of the worst bites i've ever seen. Im pretty sure that is a KEL burner modified. infact im 10000000000000% positive. That is actually his coloring style as well. Neat to do for black books but you need to stop trying to impress people and get your own style.
     
  6. hazetheone

    hazetheone Elite Member

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    proove it
    pics
    otherwise shut the fuck up
     
  7. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    Yeah yeah don't worry I won't, I just ran out of room, and hey Cap worked.

    And I was being a little bubbly, so I strayed a BIT from bars.
     
  8. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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  9. GimmieGotShot

    GimmieGotShot Senior Member

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    hiser; that piece is gonna give me nightmares. dont add arrows, bits, doo-dads, or anything. keep your letters simple until you can get into the swing of shit. i just recently started to so y'know one to another.
     
  10. kroc_oner

    kroc_oner Elite Member

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    kroc_oner Elite Member

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  12. whatadizaster!

    whatadizaster! Senior Member

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    atlok - i can finally make out the letters :)
     
  13. Animal

    Animal Senior Member

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    atlok- personally i like the one with swirls. its perty.
     
  14. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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  15. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    this is alot better. but please lose those little add on loopy/half moon things inside the letters and make a different i try a capital maybe because as of now its way to small compared to the other letters
     
  16. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    haatterrr. ha jp. but yeah I is just naturally small letter compared to others
     
  17. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    so make it capital. that's the onlything hurting your piece
     
  18. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    ahhh! i hate capital I's.
     
  19. roa

    roa Senior Member

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    super sucky
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    these all suck especially the middle on the width consistacy is off
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  20. Capo Izi

    Capo Izi Senior Member

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    Haha it's a 3 letter Bubble blockbuster, with a drop shadow and force field with lighting(which I think all look fine), so really not much simpler you can get. :p
     
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