lose that extension on the top of the H going into the S the I looks like a J disconnect the E from the R work on the structure of the R just so i have something, sorry for the shitty 3D View attachment 354492
make everything flow. like your H is going like ( but your E is going like ) and your R looks like its straight up and down. If one letter is like ( then make all of them bend that way. And work on the R.
whatadizaster! : I agree the flows not happening^. I beleive this is because you took time on your S and got it looking good but then rushed through the rest of the letters. Spend time sketching each letter till you have them the way you like then place em together. Member hiser : First off try a lightr fill, but keep the dark outline. A clean outline that pops makes the peice look better. Good starting simples but I would say stop attatching letters and fix some of them. Take some of the advice above. Junior Member MESN[905] : Looking good, My critiques would be to work on locking your drop shadow and maybey a bit thicker outline on the throw for such a thick force field and shadow. I like the mix of simples and throw though. Senior Member "Advice and Opinions FOOLS" (ignore hand)
intaout- fix ur y and k SEBR- fix the E whatadiaster- use consistent bars ------------------------- umm tell me if im going in the wrong direction here.. [Broken External Image]:http://img329.imageshack.us/img329/5580/dscn0291cd8.jpg
yeah sorry my dumbass friend was on the comp so i havent had time to look at everyones shit...but thanks for the feedback and like i said its like my 4 piece so dont hate
ill draw that piece up w/o the a and t connected and put it up here and tell me if its better nice simp reb
yeah i took ur advice wit not connnecting the t and m and it looks better i took the pic but i cant get the mem card out so ill do it later
[Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/2005_01_13giantjesus.jpg?t=1205865121 bumb any more crits on that jesus digital ? ^ and a new one exchange for satire [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00058-2.jpg?t=1205923263
on the digital what are you using...paint? if its on something other than paint it pretty sketch looking... the exchange is dope though.
tare; good direction. just dont hide the a. at first glance i thought it was a whack F. cult; not bad. keep twisting them around some.