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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. hiser

    hiser Member

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    i dont really like the E & R but i like the first part.
    ai30.tinypic.com_4gqjd0.gif


    crit?
     
  2. whatadizaster!

    whatadizaster! Senior Member

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    lose that extension on the top of the H going into the S
    the I looks like a J
    disconnect the E from the R
    work on the structure of the R

    just so i have something, sorry for the shitty 3D :(
    View attachment 354492
     
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  3. GimmieGotShot

    GimmieGotShot Senior Member

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    make everything flow.
    like your H is going like ( but your E is going like ) and your R looks like its straight up and down.
    If one letter is like ( then make all of them bend that way.
    And work on the R.
     
  4. intaout

    intaout Senior Member

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    whatadizaster! : I agree the flows not happening^. I beleive this is because you took time on your S and got it looking good but then rushed through the rest of the letters. Spend time sketching each letter till you have them the way you like then place em together.
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    hiser : First off try a lightr fill, but keep the dark outline. A clean outline that pops makes the peice look better. Good starting simples but I would say stop attatching letters and fix some of them. Take some of the advice above.
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    MESN[905] : Looking good, My critiques would be to work on locking your drop shadow and maybey a bit thicker outline on the throw for such a thick force field and shadow. I like the mix of simples and throw though.
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    "Advice and Opinions FOOLS"
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    (ignore hand)
     
  5. Backalley Abortion Doctor

    Backalley Abortion Doctor Elite Member

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    No one cares what you think
    MDC does as MDC fucking wants.
     
  6. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  7. ibomb__atm

    ibomb__atm Member

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    ai116.photobucket.com_albums_o1_rage11_photos_DONTKICKCATSHIT029.jpg

    like my 4th throw

    crits
     
  8. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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    give crits to get crits broseph

    that throwie is wack as fuck btw
     
  9. shookone

    shookone Member

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    try not connecting the t with the a and am

    looks better than my first few throws though
     
  10. reb

    reb Member

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    My stuffs embarassing..

    ai237.photobucket.com_albums_ff215_Lachy911_cultsteez001.jpg

    ai237.photobucket.com_albums_ff215_Lachy911_cultsteez002.jpg
    ^^Stuffed up the shadow.


    Bleh.
     
  11. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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    get rid of the extensions

    and like I said before give crits to get crits
     
  12. ibomb__atm

    ibomb__atm Member

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    yeah sorry my dumbass friend was on the comp so i havent had time to look at everyones shit...but thanks for the feedback and like i said its like my 4 piece so dont hate
     
  13. ibomb__atm

    ibomb__atm Member

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  14. reb

    reb Member

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    Bump to new page.

    ibomb - dont join the A and T.
    Tare - show the A more, it sorta looks like a P
     
  15. ibomb__atm

    ibomb__atm Member

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    ill draw that piece up w/o the a and t connected and put it up here and tell me if its better

    nice simp reb
     
  16. ibomb__atm

    ibomb__atm Member

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    yeah i took ur advice wit not connnecting the t and m and it looks better i took the pic but i cant get the mem card out so ill do it later
     
  17. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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  18. Chump

    Chump Senior Member

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    on the digital what are you using...paint?
    if its on something other than paint it pretty sketch looking...
    the exchange is dope though.
     
  19. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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  20. GimmieGotShot

    GimmieGotShot Senior Member

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    tare; good direction. just dont hide the a. at first glance i thought it was a whack F.
    cult; not bad. keep twisting them around some.