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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. :RAVE:

    :RAVE: Member

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    JETPACK - good old decos my man

    mr. octane - way 2 skip right by me...
    lose the bubbles
     
  2. hazetheone

    hazetheone Elite Member

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    some school shit
    i realy don't like the second one
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    vowels-get a scanner and dont put shit over your letters
    tech-just do straight letters dont point the bottoms
    rave-coneect everybar in one letter dont do them seperately
    cyto-i realy like that style man keep it up
    silent-nice simp nothing special to crit tho
    seywat-the fable fill is way off but mine is on point ill do you one tomorrow at school
    mr octane-spread out your letters a little bit but just enough where you can see all of them not too much
     
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  3. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    haze- that second one is dope! the E is bangin
     
  4. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    haze, im diggin the first one a lot. ill flow an im diggin the tail on the A and R.

    *e-pound*

    im diggin the M on your bomb too
     
  5. Mr. Octane

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    oh damn, my fault rave sorry bout that...i like how u have the 2 different shades of green in the letters tht shit is fresh, i suggest that you follow haze's advice tho and dont overlap the bars. other than that tho ur doin pretty good so far

    haze that second one is dope...how do you not like that lol
     
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  6. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    ai19.photobucket.com_albums_b159_civichatch2005_Picture193.jpg

    I know it sucks but it was quick to show I'm not an idiot i was just trying stu[pid ish
     
  7. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    vois that looks a lot better than everything else youve done. keep the letters the same size bro, your gettin it. bring your V up a bit and your S down a bit. all your letters are kinna on a slight slope upwards
     
  8. headsick123

    headsick123 Senior Member

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  9. roa

    roa Senior Member

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    voiss and cash--- spread your letters out and do simple simple simple stuff... dont worry about anything fancy. make them all the same width and heigth

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  10. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    it looks likes your learning to use bars better now, but try to keep a consistent widgth of the bars and lose all those little extension/curly thingies
    just start tryin to get a little flow with your letters now, simples just bend em a bit and experiment with that
     
  11. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    #2 pet peeve, when people repeat crits
     
  12. vowels

    vowels Senior Member

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    Thanks guys and I have a scanner but I'm not going to rip shit out of my book for you guys. Nice crits btw.. pfft.
     
  13. meetermaid

    meetermaid Elite Member

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    old n new, mostly old, can't remember if i've posted some of this shit or not
    haven't been sketching too much latelyyyyy

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    crits greatly appreciated - seems like whenever i post i just get dickriding compliments but nothing of real substance?
     
  14. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

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  15. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    First one is helluvva sketchy, not very good, I don't suggest doing that one anymore. Your hands are pretty nice, I like um. The Orange Meet, the M isn't flowing with the E's at all, and the T is a tad low. The Yellow and Orange one, I like it, but the center bar on the E, I think it would look better if it was fatter, if you know what I mean and I'm not really feelin' that last one too much. Any questions, just PM me 'cuz I don't like to clog up this thread with chitchat.
     
  16. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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    the first one is not so great, handies are all good, the bottom three are ok except on the orange one dont do the colon thing with the bottom of your t.

    zof really feelin that, euro pacman
     
  17. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  18. :RAVE:

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    k i know the force is wack i just felt like tryin that steez out

    cyto - yeah i liked the it much better in pencil

    rfi - yeah it looks nice but i dun like the pacman thing

    meet - id say ur bakcwards one is the nicest but i dun like the red n yellow 1 with the spirals

    roa - i like the top 1 best

    cash ur gettin 2 tricky go simpler

    vois - gettin better

    haze - what r u talkin about i like the bottom one better then the top
     
  19. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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    rave- that style doesn't seem to work to well
    tech- dope simples
    head- lose the add-ons
    haze- that throwie is fuckin dope
     
  20. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    tare/sonic- damn your getting gooder faster. keep er goin