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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
JETPACK - good old decos my man
mr. octane - way 2 skip right by me...
lose the bubbles
some school shit
i realy don't like the second one
vowels-get a scanner and dont put shit over your letters
tech-just do straight letters dont point the bottoms
rave-coneect everybar in one letter dont do them seperately
cyto-i realy like that style man keep it up
silent-nice simp nothing special to crit tho
seywat-the fable fill is way off but mine is on point ill do you one tomorrow at school
mr octane-spread out your letters a little bit but just enough where you can see all of them not too much
haze- that second one is dope! the E is bangin
haze, im diggin the first one a lot. ill flow an im diggin the tail on the A and R.
im diggin the M on your bomb too
oh damn, my fault rave sorry bout that...i like how u have the 2 different shades of green in the letters tht shit is fresh, i suggest that you follow haze's advice tho and dont overlap the bars. other than that tho ur doin pretty good so far
haze that second one is dope...how do you not like that lol
I know it sucks but it was quick to show I'm not an idiot i was just trying stu[pid ish
vois that looks a lot better than everything else youve done. keep the letters the same size bro, your gettin it. bring your V up a bit and your S down a bit. all your letters are kinna on a slight slope upwards
voiss and cash--- spread your letters out and do simple simple simple stuff... dont worry about anything fancy. make them all the same width and heigth
it looks likes your learning to use bars better now, but try to keep a consistent widgth of the bars and lose all those little extension/curly thingies
just start tryin to get a little flow with your letters now, simples just bend em a bit and experiment with that
#2 pet peeve, when people repeat crits
Thanks guys and I have a scanner but I'm not going to rip shit out of my book for you guys. Nice crits btw.. pfft.
old n new, mostly old, can't remember if i've posted some of this shit or not
haven't been sketching too much latelyyyyy
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crits greatly appreciated - seems like whenever i post i just get dickriding compliments but nothing of real substance?
silent- you're improving... maybe lose the things at the bottom of the M though..
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bump this one too
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First one is helluvva sketchy, not very good, I don't suggest doing that one anymore. Your hands are pretty nice, I like um. The Orange Meet, the M isn't flowing with the E's at all, and the T is a tad low. The Yellow and Orange one, I like it, but the center bar on the E, I think it would look better if it was fatter, if you know what I mean and I'm not really feelin' that last one too much. Any questions, just PM me 'cuz I don't like to clog up this thread with chitchat.
the first one is not so great, handies are all good, the bottom three are ok except on the orange one dont do the colon thing with the bottom of your t.
zof really feelin that, euro pacman
Zof- I like them, but those pacman look off
and Im really disappointed wiht how this came out, I dislike my corrections
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k i know the force is wack i just felt like tryin that steez out
cyto - yeah i liked the it much better in pencil
rfi - yeah it looks nice but i dun like the pacman thing
meet - id say ur bakcwards one is the nicest but i dun like the red n yellow 1 with the spirals
roa - i like the top 1 best
cash ur gettin 2 tricky go simpler
vois - gettin better
haze - what r u talkin about i like the bottom one better then the top
rave- that style doesn't seem to work to well
tech- dope simples
head- lose the add-ons
haze- that throwie is fuckin dope
tare/sonic- damn your getting gooder faster. keep er goin
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