vois-the white did get fucked up, but other then that it looks pretty good. the s is a lil warped tho. but its still aight keso-i like the top throw the most. the e is a lil messed up. a great start if you just fix the e. i like it neza-im liking it. but cause its a single letter ya cant tell if its got enough flow or anything. but i like what i see so far View attachment 360571 crits? dont mind the dark ass colouring
View attachment 360572 vois- id go back to the squared edges, the rounded shit makes it look toy unless the letters are skinny. other than that, fatten up the s a little bit and you've got a decent simple. keso- thats a nice throw you got going, just keep working on it. neza- i like the e alot, but those extentions im not so sure about. it all depends if you can pull it off with the whole piece and make it look good. post the whole thing up. tanky- nothing to complain about, you're simples are lookin good bruva. i just dont like the 2. sohoe- (top picture) you ruined a perfect simple with those connections! get rid of that shit and you'll be good to go. the throws are lookin good tho man, keep it up. libre- i like where youre going with your style, keep it up homey.
STEW- fix the s in that first piece desipher- loving it, add some colors hoers- work on the s and thats will be a nice bomb i was doing some new style but it came out kinda wack [Broken External Image]:http://img502.imageshack.us/img502/9031/0408081801sk0.th.jpg
thanks man ya im doing a couple more sketchs like that just with diff letters n shit tryin out new things its really different from my old style but then again i dont really have a style
hey guys, i havent had my book for a while, just got it back so i decided to make up for it. View attachment 360635 crits? merm - not feeling it at all man. get funky tezm - nice simple! looks nice! garbage - cool throw, but everyone has that style
naik- they look pretty good, just dont shade them in for color, use markers [Broken External Image]:http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/5706/caisyellowstripelx2.jpg just finished this: cais
Taskone - I think it'd look better without the arrows or the two thousand eight in the middle, maybe move it to one side it looks like it was forced in there Naik - i'd say do it in marker to make it stand out a bit better, and sperate the dot from your i from the bar a wee bit Atlok - all i can think of is maybe moving the bottom right quotation marks closer to the bottom corner, like around the exclamation mark or something other than the above crits looking good guys, here's a simple sketch i did earlier today
make the bars the same with for everything. and dont go that simple add some flare to it. at least more colour and an outline. no offense. but a 5th grader could do that. make it more original.
cais- likin the colour scheme. not feelin the I though, maybe try making the S not so scrunches up either. nothin really new, just flared it out at the top and bottom (horrible job but its rushed). fuck white paint pens, the shine isnt as bad as it looks. crits?
Atlok - I aint feelin it as much as ur old style Silent - Ur finally progressing and its lookin good View attachment 360732 started as an e and just kept goin View attachment 360733 View attachment 360734 shoes im doin for a friend. crits?