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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Give crits to get 'em.
     
  2. Saeo1

    Saeo1 Senior Member

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    Okay, ur letter sturcture is actually pretty good, just need some more funk to it like a one shot, 3-D , shadow. anything.

    ai168.photobucket.com_albums_u178_Sfeo_Oner_100_0434.jpg
    - Was on a computer desk( so kinda sketchy + marker was dieing), nothing but the peice was my doin- was just at a party n other stupid people wanted to join in on the fun.
     
  3. Keke

    Keke Senior Member

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    ^^ you talking about me?
    anyway i like your letters , i dont know why they just stand out , the way you used the markers to shade is cool but i think the shadows are ugly for some reason, they are kinda killin it rest is good though
     
  4. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    saeo- New to graffiti thread.

    NNNEWEWEWEWW, I'm off to bed after this. Tireddd.

    ai274.photobucket.com_albums_jj241_mazeonerr_rokem2.jpg
     
  5. Saeo1

    Saeo1 Senior Member

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    Noo lol im taking about Pie's SKA te one. yours just need to much work. i dont wanna be like everyone who says go to simples. but learn to make a straight line with proper 3-D or shadow. I mean i hate when people tell me to switch my style but with u theres not a style there. so yah. Just try straight letters with a even 3-D or shadow.

    and new to graffiti lol? I think not. You shud talk for yourself. Not only does ur M need so much work but hate to include your E's and K.
     
  6. ReBuilt

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    bump.
     
  7. Saeo1

    Saeo1 Senior Member

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    Its alright. the only thing is ide loose the top park of the E and K and C that fold over and pop out. I like the I. and if the second letters a A, id say make it more obvious that thats what it is.
     
  8. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Hush, Mar's ish is much better than yours. And my piece reads skate, just ran out of room.
     
  9. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    yo mar the orange/red sketch is fire,
    but this new one is hyper generic
     
  10. Snew

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    Esic... sick style and your 3-d is right on.
    Rebuilt... your peice is awesome but that arrow does def. stand out.. all the other extensions look great tho.
    MarOne... your peice makes a great composition. i dig all the e's in a row.. ha steezy
    portus... you def have drawing skills just work on them letters.. good work..

    [Broken External Image]:http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f90/goonies3845/Photo21.jpg

    Ehh.. i dont know how i feel about this.. i dig the colors.. but let me know how the style is... im trying to get a nice simple down so any crits would rock...
     
  11. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Don't let your letters overlap themselves for now
     
  12. Snew

    Snew Senior Member

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    you mean overlap each other or like individual letters.. like the n and the s?
     
  13. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    bumb any more crits ?

    witch one do you mean there are all exchanges
     
  14. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    bump
    that shit is fresh man
     
  15. rsakens

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  16. rave316

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  17. sKeeLo

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    ayo lifes been good big nemz, got a new pup, place right in the heart of baltimore but still cant drag my ass into work everyday. u probaly noticed all the people in our lil group of posters like niccsacc, inkbits, sumoe, tricks, shamee, alive n them other bastards dont post too much anymore :(:(:( after you left i tried to organize a NEMZ battle but i flaked and only big el did something which was real nice, dont know where u would find it thoo on here but its posted somewhere . . .

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    exchnage with mr kens, thanks fro that BUGS exchangaroo man
     
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  18. opte one

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  19. opte one

    opte one Senior Member

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    sorry for teh double post but how do you get them too teh correct size ?
     
  20. rsakens

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