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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
Damn kroc, that shit's dope!
WOW!!! cais dope
but im really surprised noone noticd the graffiti generator bite on herbn
and that no one has bitched at blitz for writing sieze now
Herb: I'm not feelin' the first one at all. You may be onto something with that style, but it doesn't seem like it can be pulled off quite yet. I like the second one much more- it seems a lot more "polished" if you will...
atlok: I like this one a lot except for a couple things: its a little left-heavy with the arrow and other extensions on that side and not on the right side. I like the variation of color in the extensions a lot, but it seems like these could be placed a bit better, but you're onto something with that idea for sure. I'd roll with that idea if I were you.
kroc: I like the lettering on both of these, however the fill on the first one really takes away from it. In my opinion its a bit too dark for the thin lines that make up the letters. I like the second one better for the simple fact that I can pick out the structure very easily, but I'm not really feelin' the "cracks" on the outside of the letters although I don't think you were aiming for a whole lot with that idea from the looks of it.
Here's a sketch I did today during school... bored lol. It's unfinished, but I was just looking for some crits on what I've got so far. Thanks in advance.
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sos-reminds me of shit i did when i first started. try to get some simple bar letters down.
amk-not really feeling the Z, but it's got a hella funky feel to it, i dig it.
atlok-left arrow is kind of fucked, but i'm feeling the overall style a lot.
kroc-2nd one is alright, but try to get better structure in your letters (..bars, possibly?)
bsquared-loooose the arrows, and try to make the letters all one size
haven't been sketching much lately, but here's some random scraps from school. the O on the 2nd is wackkk.
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Hazetheone - Man.. people havent noticed that cause not everyone is on B.S. just to bitch at other people...
If he is ignorant enought o write Seize, let him.
and if Herbn looks to a graffitigen for an idea... who the fuck cares?
Dont spend all your time ripping people down.
lol i tryed bars im not good with them i might try again but i suck at fill and im working still on the structure moes thts pretty dope
scuared i like the fill but simpler
i wasn't ripping anyone down idiot i fucking said i was surprised noone(aka people who are friends with sieze) hasn't said anything to him
not that he shouldn't wright it
i also pointed out that no one called him on his bite because he needs to stop becauseif he wants to progress he never will stealing someone elses work
dont try and sound mature and all idiot
fucking check yourself and examine what i said before you come at me
its hard to notice a graff generator bite when he cant even draw a straight line. thats what i was gonna crit him for. oh well, get a straight line going bro. if you cant do that then you shouldnt be writing.
and blitz thought krocs work was dope. nuff said
mose, make the E capital, i find it killing the overall appearance and flow of it. your M is hella fresh. i like your O as well. but S could use a bit of work. but its mainly your E (first sketch)
b squared, simples man, thats hard to read. do block letters for now and slowly add style to your letters from there.
HAZE, KEEP RIPPIN EM. you gotta weed out the weak, spoon feeding dosent make anyone better. tearing peoples shit up is what makes them better. if he takes offense to it, he shouldnt be writing. graff is a world with no love. and he's not gonna get love from many people
iunno about this one, i think its wack. i havent been feelin it tonight. need to bunn a head. its been too long.
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im starting to love you jetpack
the middle bar in the n gets to an awkward size right at the end
The true toys are the ones who spend all their time calling other ones out.
Just keep doing your own art, and help those who are worse than you get better.
post some pictures or shut the hell up dude
you must be dumb or something calling out a bite is the most spiritual form of help out there
last time i checked, a bite wasnt really your own form of art. and there is no such thing as a "true toy"
a toys a fucking toy. everyone in this forum is a toy. its called the TOY FORUM and your posting here. its not called "the true toy forum, post here only if you want to call out other toys for biting"
jesus christ. either kids are getting dumber or my IQ grows each night...
bump for ranting
kroc, you need to use bars bro. it takes a while to get used to, but once you get the idea it just flows along. it took me a minute to get used to bars, but now that i can try to add some steeze to my bars. although this piece was wack haha
camer u use bars right and nice stuff
crit mine please?
hahahahahhaa, nice haze
kroc i gave you a crit when i edited my post
your IQ or EGO?
it makes no difference.. if all you want to do is rip into people.. stop giving crit. You just annoy everyone else.
annnnd im not going to start any shit with you, cause fighting on the internet is like running in the special olympics. Even if you win, you're still retarted..
some lame shit i'm trying, hard to get same flow with elmers painters
Haze- You said what I was thinking about that Blitz kid and the kid biting,
Jet- Ilike these ones, i agree with Haze on the N bar ending oddly.
k thanks tank i think i crited yours already and vois good simples
vois keep working on simples ull get the hang of it soon
well good job getting a joke that isn't funny out of someones sig
vois-you are diffinately on the right track
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