capo. dont do any add ons, no stars, no arrows or anything other than your letters. make your letters follow a straight line. and dont do any character type things to replace your letters. do that and lets see how it looks
If you don't mind, can you tell me...why? Evade-I have throws....I'm just confused, I've posted stuff like this, but sloppier and they said it was fine.......
dont try 'new' styles until you have atleast one decent style already. try finding a style you like. be it, straight letters, block letters, bubble letters, whatever. draw the alphabet in that style, until you can get practically every letter perfect. you should be able to write almost any word with one particular style. THAT IS YOUR STYLE. then you can progress further.
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Cais - your shits dope, but everytime I see one of your pieces I think the I looks like a T. But thats in my opinion.
Evasion of Invasion- that morne sketch is tight, love them letters/ colours the end- i like the M and O. not into that R though mite need work. yortseD.eht.hturT- that siren sketch would look better if the letters were not joined, and maybe lose the arrows n yellow squiggles above the piece. -different E on that one -one liner, pretty fucked. not into it [Broken External Image]:http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r240/bojangles999/DSC00574.jpg maner handstyle
capo i think you need to lose the bars coming off the C, and the arrows and the top left of the P is retarded. the bottom right of the A comes into a sort of box thing which isnt right. I circled all the bits that i think need to be lost and the bits that i think need to be fixed.[Broken External Image]:http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/6640/l4d4a7fdd2b4c44e4a1485adx1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/6640/l4d4a7fdd2b4c44e4a1485adx1.adedd6b551.jpg used my awesome ms paint skills to do some capo simples.. first one is straight edged second is curved but yeah, hopefully youll get an idea of what people mean by simple. [Broken External Image]:http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6302/capodp8.png [Broken External Image]:http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6302/capodp8.317beaa626.jpg anyways, i like how you dont give up, keep at it man.