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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
QUICK LITTLE BUMP
here are a few more i though i would post
this one i fuck_d the shadow on the E and S at the end
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This one is alright, on the writing the N looks retarted
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do simples. use skinny (proportional) bars and do the most basic straightest simples you could ever imagine. Seriously copy the letters on your keyboard, i promise this is the only way you will improve.
new to graff thread now seriously
what about the background? any colors to the letters? shadows? what else..
no make yur letters look good first dont rush it it takes patients
dont worry about colours for now, stick to pencil
unless your drawing your fill first as a referance for your outline, dont worry about one. For shadow, just use a drop shadow for now. pretend you're moving your letters slightly up and to the right and where ever they were before you moved them color black. heres what i mean:
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If this gets ignored I swear to you youll never have to see me again.
what are the letters? WS?
cais, a s has two twist right? top and bottom one, but you have too much foucus on the bottom twist and not the top, so it doesn't really look like an s...... but all other letters look fine to me, a is a little more wild then the other letters, but nothing big.
oh yea, you fuckerz crack me up sometimes. for the past five pages of BS. hahah.
edit: wrong section...
White, you make me sad so far I haven't seen anyone on here from Colorado that doesn't 95% suck. Lameeeee
Epoc- S and E need some work
Cerex89- I really like it, would be tight as hell if the J was more in line with the bottom of the rest
Moes- Middle one is my fav, feelin the E
Bi2ar- Second one looks best, I like the name it's crazy
this looks sort of descent. change your name though kid.
as for the real criting:
make your A S and E the same height as the b. i guess some people do that the way you did it because when theyre taught how to write regular print, they're taught that the lower case letters are half as tall as upper case. yeah just make them as tall as the B... like this: Base LOL. not like this: Base ok go.
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Freestyles in red felt tip.Not much but oh well.
Vois nice simple letters but I think you should stop raising the O into the air.keep it down with the other letters.
fucked up on tha a
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base work on the top of ur s
white ''block letters''
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T-done: New to graffiti thread, buddy. You need to learn the basics of using bars.
Blue-steel: I would say to move your letters a little further apart... I can't see a thing in that mess.
This is awesome raby. Keep this up.
Here's some new ish for y'alls-
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^Work in progress
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^Something I have actually finished.
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