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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    I was thinking about it too, but even if it was a bite, you did his style better :p Just not feelin' the E, looks naked, you know?
     
  2. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    Yeah, I haven't even seen most of klops stuff, and I never intended to bite. I think that his ish looks nothing like mine.
     
  3. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    It's just the lumpy parts. No need to carry on about it anymore.
    I might sketch tomorrow, shield your loved ones, and wear at least SPF noob when checking out the thread.
     
  4. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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  5. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    If that says Sent im not feeling the N atall, with its weird little blendy bendy.
     
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  6. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    well epoc, first off dont diss my letters when you can barely make one yourself
    second off, dont say blendy bendy, what are you 12? shut up or battle me
     
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  7. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    a)Just cause im not as good as you doesnt mean i dont know what good looks like
    b) BLENDY B E N D Y <- two different words cant handle a little gay ass rhyming?
    c) Wtf is with people and the big shit attitude here, "gdm i can take recommendations from this toy, i was only where he was a year and a half ago, im so much superior" calm the fuck down im not dissing or hating anything.
    d) "N" not "E" my bad.
     
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  8. Nine9

    Nine9 Senior Member

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    Bump for crits/advice.



    Soboe/Sent - Love the E, hate the T. S & N are fine though I think, the T just throws it all off.

    Nukes - Maybe try a more basic E? Lowercase maybe? Or simply bend it another way. There's more thanone way to draw a letter.
     
  9. shiva - the destroyer

    shiva - the destroyer Senior Member

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    i don't like the big arrow, it makes the 3d look a bit simple and boring
     
  10. Nine9

    Nine9 Senior Member

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    Yeah I guess you're right.

    I like the simplicity of it though, it works well. I'm working my way up from simples letters to nice bendy shit that flows, so this is like the start of my progression really.

    I figure as I sketch more and more I'll gradually get more complex and original.
     
  11. pureemoti0n

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  12. shiva - the destroyer

    shiva - the destroyer Senior Member

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    nice shading, now go work on your letters
     
  13. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    View attachment 372811

    pureemoti0n- youre good at drawing guns, id just do that instead of graffiti.

    Nine- that would be a perfectly nice simple if you didnt put that shit all around it.

    Sent- the E and N are fuckin sick. I'd work on the S a little.
     
  14. nero112

    nero112 Elite Member

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    pure emotion if your gnna draw body's do your reserch into form n shit so they dont look like shit faces need work eyes are to out of proportion so on .. just start over but if your 9 then its good
     
  15. Panda Jerk

    Panda Jerk Elite Member

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    i like it but idk thers sumthin about stars i dont like but nonetheless its sick homie.<3


    oh btw im working on my os ther getting better so ther not as fugly haha :D
     
  16. Backalley Abortion Doctor

    Backalley Abortion Doctor Elite Member

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    That thur looks like a rots T :O I trademark the swishes.
     
  17. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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    someone cant take constructive criticism. you asked for crits and thats what you got, and everything he said was right on. The "E" (if thats what it is) is fuxored, and the "S" and "N" arent far behind. Keep it straight for a while...

    Care to battle? PM me if your down.
     
  18. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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  19. sanrtizer

    sanrtizer Senior Member

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    HOER<33 lets exchange
     
  20. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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