[Broken External Image]:http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f289/Blood_runner/scan0003.jpg erm....yeah....PURE
cais, honestly guy. do your own steeze. but dont forget simples. bar widths an all that shit. your the kinna guy that wont do simples long enough to have em down solidly, but you have a good idea on them. just do your own thing. and every once in a while do a straight simple sketch, no add ons or extensions.
i dont know, everyone keeps tellin you to do simples, im thinkin it looks pretty cool. the stars are wack though, otherwise alright
i think its pretty simple minus all the little arrows and shit, but hey whatever. only thing i dont really like is the swirl in the a.
Why do people even give crits in here. Every crit should be go simple, and once you start simple and move forward you won't need crits because you will have basic letter structure and from there it's just trial and error til you have a style you can work with and you will like.
haha oh god i give up. you was actually just getting a LITTLE bit better Atlok..then this. peace guys bump that Oaklander
see u notice u aint done or know how to do simples. looks at that N, in the one part. it flat at the top left then pointy at the bottom right. see if u did the simples u would of become better, because u would of notice this. then some of ur letter stucture is WAY OFF, look at the I not the stucture is all over the place. again the reason why u need to do simples. these random extensions, NO, just NOOO damn u! so go back to simples and dont colour in, because u need to learn ur letter stucture first. ps. ohh yeah ur stars are shit! and FUCKIN LISTEN! [Broken External Image]:http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f289/Blood_runner/scan0003.jpg look dont start filling in shit yet, please. or 3D, just do letters on the keyboard, copy it until u can do them blindfolded! for infomation about graffiti please go the new to graff thread i kno there is alot but i would make u a better 'writer' over night!
few new throws, simple pure?- hit the simples, and some of the advice you gave was right but hes much better than you and i dont think you could make him a better writer overnight everyone tells him to use better structure cais- i think you know that you shouldnt continue on that style but you gotta keep experimenting im pretty sure everyone here has a crap experiment, they just didnt post it, you did
] then why would u post it? hey lets post something that i dont want tobe crited on? enough, i still mean in general, cuz even if ur 'messing around' u would still do that shit i sed above! still need to do simples.
[Broken External Image]:http://i292.photobucket.com/albums/mm7/ZOMADA1/edit.jpg Me and my homie "KEY" He just started... and im tryin something new with the sep blocks
Atlok that looks sick, a few tweeks here and there are all that's needed. I write with a guy who does the euro-styling, I like the organic nature of this style. If you like it then keep working it up til you're happy. What do you think about your own sketch?
thanks dude. yeah i thought it was cool cause it was different but i did it in like 10 mins compared to like 45.
this was like a week back. id say its pretty simple [Broken External Image]:http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/9994/caisorangegreydoublepagos4.jpg this was two sketches ago. note, baze, and a couple other people in the big black book thread said it was getting good [Broken External Image]:http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4729/caisrocklobsterwp9.jpg