yo atlok, the a doesnt flow there, its too bendy and spacey if you catch my drift. KE doesnt work together (K too small if you ask me) but rest looks good
kid uses my "E" its not fair! ive been doing that forever... oh well shit happens. btw its the last letter in the "Bombing SciencE" hand steez. atlok its fresh we know even the big boy forums liked it alot
atlok-overally it looks nice,.but still,the stars aren't drawn properly,the bar on top of the last E has to go.,other than that everything seems ok trying a new style,its developped from one of my hand styles(look at the handie on the bottom of the page).i know some add-ons/arrows etc,,may not flow i was just messing around to see what it gives.i used a calligraphy pen btw. View attachment 374142
needs more arrows. throw more wiggles in your bars too. there too straight. put a bigger space in between your T and R there too close.
weird,but i thought doing all those things,i thought there was already enough arrows and adding some more would kill the piece.At the begining when i started sketching there was a gap between the t and r,and i thought it would be better if the bars weren't so straight thanks for the crit though
damm cais thats just sick ^ thankx man and i will have to work on something better now after you dit something proper for me =D
Don't know, some movie. Inked this sucker- [Broken External Image]:http://img360.imageshack.us/img360/6641/photo14vl4.jpg