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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
p.s. shuks i like the first one other than the pointy things on the u and k
lol well there was basically a whole page of no crits..so i just summed it all up in one huge post
desipher / phaser: lose the squiglies in the e and r
shuk: lose the arrow at the end of the k, and work on your handstyles
WBS throwie: crits?
Pegcity boy - the throw dont have any flow try makin em all caps
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short EV throw crits?
PegCity - Just work on the flow, try a diff. "B"
Evade - Clean enough, go paint it.
Fube - Always killin shit.
evasion, i think it would be nice if you would lose some of the doodles in the e
clout, thats really nice, very clean.
meh, i rushed this once i finished the initial outline.
loving that shadow clout like all the letters except the middle of the m
just practicing letters
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Yo yo bump that saroe piece. shit is firee
I would like to do nice letter like you.. My structure suck soo bad... and my colours too.. Can someone give me a hit for my letter structure?
i think your name is aruma but i like that alot the 3d is sick
BUMP FOR CRITZ?
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My shitty throw.
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Think maybe this S is better. Hmm.. still looks like shit. I'm embarrased about my throws.
Anybody have any advice about throws? Every time I try them they suck, or look like someones else ones.
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Hand I be working on.
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Pen freestyle I made at school.
Jetpack - Too big S don't like the k leg. E should be a bit wider maybe. But good and simple.
Fube - nice and original
Soboe - Not feeling your S and R, but otherwise it's realy dope.
Deco one - Don't like the super long bars. But it's fine, just make the bars not that long.
Arsn - on first one make the letters more apart from eachother. Maybe it's only me but I can't realy read some letters beacause they are too together. Second one is realy as raped. Go do some straight letters don't even color that.
Kans - nice oneliner, N and S need work on that piece a bit. But it's dope!
Lasic - make L,A,S more separet. Use warmer colors for fill.
Desipher - that's rocking!
Shuk - take your time. the K bar is too big on the first one.
Nice spark but work more on ur letters structure!
Deco that last one is pretty sick
spark ur throwie looks like it would take a while to put up if u plan on fillin it in
Vandal, if i send u a simple.. can u tell me what can i do to make it better?
ya lol PM me
heres something i did last night
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people are gonna say seperate ur letters.
and the top of the r is more skinny then the rest
but wow thats a super dope s
Not bad.. but is it RISK or RUSK? and i like the green things on it! it cool
It looks okay, but you need to distinguish your letters.
I like that original dripping sludge too, hahahaha
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