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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. squidone

    squidone Senior Member

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    i agree

    p.s. shuks i like the first one other than the pointy things on the u and k
     
  2. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    lol well there was basically a whole page of no crits..so i just summed it all up in one huge post
     
  3. PegCityBoy

    PegCityBoy Senior Member

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    desipher / phaser: lose the squiglies in the e and r

    shuk: lose the arrow at the end of the k, and work on your handstyles

    WBS throwie: crits?

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  4. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    Pegcity boy - the throw dont have any flow try makin em all caps
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    short EV throw crits?
     
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  5. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    PegCity - Just work on the flow, try a diff. "B"
    Evade - Clean enough, go paint it.
    Fube - Always killin shit.

    Exchange..

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  6. wafflecakee

    wafflecakee Elite Member

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    evasion, i think it would be nice if you would lose some of the doodles in the e
    clout, thats really nice, very clean.

    meh, i rushed this once i finished the initial outline.
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  7. pureemoti0n

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  8. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    Yo yo bump that saroe piece. shit is firee
     
  9. AMRO1

    AMRO1 Senior Member

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  10. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    i think your name is aruma but i like that alot the 3d is sick
     
  11. DECO ONE

    DECO ONE Senior Member

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    BUMP FOR CRITZ?
     
  12. Spark391

    Spark391 Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4034/picture648wk7.jpg
    My shitty throw.

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    Think maybe this S is better. Hmm.. still looks like shit. I'm embarrased about my throws.
    Anybody have any advice about throws? Every time I try them they suck, or look like someones else ones.

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    Hand I be working on.

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    Pen freestyle I made at school.

    Jetpack - Too big S don't like the k leg. E should be a bit wider maybe. But good and simple.
    Fube - nice and original
    Soboe - Not feeling your S and R, but otherwise it's realy dope.
    Deco one - Don't like the super long bars. But it's fine, just make the bars not that long.
    Arsn - on first one make the letters more apart from eachother. Maybe it's only me but I can't realy read some letters beacause they are too together. Second one is realy as raped. Go do some straight letters don't even color that.
    Kans - nice oneliner, N and S need work on that piece a bit. But it's dope!
    Lasic - make L,A,S more separet. Use warmer colors for fill.
    Desipher - that's rocking!
    Shuk - take your time. the K bar is too big on the first one.
     
  13. AMRO1

    AMRO1 Senior Member

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    Nice spark but work more on ur letters structure!
     
  14. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    Deco that last one is pretty sick
    spark ur throwie looks like it would take a while to put up if u plan on fillin it in
     
  15. AMRO1

    AMRO1 Senior Member

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    Vandal, if i send u a simple.. can u tell me what can i do to make it better?
     
  16. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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  17. Ity

    Ity Senior Member

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  18. blue.steel

    blue.steel Senior Member

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    people are gonna say seperate ur letters.
    and the top of the r is more skinny then the rest
    but wow thats a super dope s
     
  19. AMRO1

    AMRO1 Senior Member

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    Not bad.. but is it RISK or RUSK? and i like the green things on it! it cool
     
  20. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    It looks okay, but you need to distinguish your letters.

    I like that original dripping sludge too, hahahaha