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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. AMRO1

    AMRO1 Senior Member

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    Mork, nice colours and letterr! Keep it up buddy! :)
     
  2. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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    gracias
     
  3. AMRO1

    AMRO1 Senior Member

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    I've just seen that with simple letters.. ( Like mork one ) you can do awesome things! I just need to get the insperation and i'll do one like this :p
     
  4. neza

    neza Senior Member

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    MorK

    you need to wrok on your lines most of them are shakey

    the colour choice is not all that but im not a huge fan of brown it looks mucky if you know what i mean

    dope colour combos = green + blue, purple + yellow/orange, red + turquiose

    dont bother with things like characterising your letters with stuff like teeth and eyes its not worth the effort spend more time working on your lines

    and making tiny adjustments to your letters

    try and make all the letters have the same feel

    -neza
     
  5. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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    word, i need to invest in a color chart BADLY
     
  6. neza

    neza Senior Member

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    AmrO

    you need to work and plain letters made from bars that are the same width so if the side of your A is thick make the cross bar the same forget 3D for now work on making all your letters the same size and proportion

    youll get there

    long way to go though
     
  7. neza

    neza Senior Member

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    forget that man just look at some of the pro's colour choices and you will see what i mean im not saying bite fills or nothing but borrow the colours
     
  8. neza

    neza Senior Member

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    simples for you my friend the whole thing looks awkward try keeping your letters on the same line and the same dimensions for now i know its boring but it seems you need to work on your structure more trust me the more simples you sketch the better you will gradually realise how far you can push a letter the N is barely recognisable and the join on the o is tottally out of place

    simples simples simples
     
  9. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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    a color chart shows you what colors compliment eachother better though.
     
  10. cyber one

    cyber one Senior Member

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    bump for crits
     
  11. neza

    neza Senior Member

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    have you ever heard of a simple? do you know what one is? have you ever tried one?

    if the answer to any of these is a no then try sketching a simple by that i mean boring letters like the ones on your keyboard

    the do that some more

    when you have finished that ... do it again......and again

    ...

    -neza
     
  12. neza

    neza Senior Member

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    actually even if the answer is yes

    do it anyway!

    then do it some more

    and post some of those
     
  13. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    ^ dude shut up.
    you have no idea what your talking about.

    cyber, some of that shit is dope.
    keep doin your thing.
     
  14. neza

    neza Senior Member

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    yeah ok man....

    looking at those sketches i can see all kindsa crap in all of them none are "dope" and more than half the real writers here will agree

    and if you think they are that say a whole lot about you

    the guy aint gonna imporve unless you tell him where he's going wrong this is a case of trying to run before you can walk

    i aint beefing but thats the truth
     
  15. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Not really, his shit is pretty good.
     
  16. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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  17. neza

    neza Senior Member

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    ima leave you guys to it
    but one last thing try and spot 1 clean sketch amongst those pencil lines and all sorts
    the second from last one could be good but still needs work

    -neza
     
  18. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    Syer - only one im feelin is the last one, i aint a big fan of the top of the S and where the Y goes into it the rest of it looks good tho
    Mork - not rly feelin it, try to put in some colours u can blend
    View attachment 375018
    crits?
     
  19. squidone

    squidone Senior Member

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  20. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    Um, you are a fucking retard if you can't see that Syer's shit is on point.