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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Fame.

    Fame. Member

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    when i said its a simple sketch i meant its juss like a rough piece thaa i coulda made better if i took tha time, cuz samp1e thinks i needa "get my letters straight" ... i dont mean simple as in tha WHOLE piece in general

    anyways.. thaa rasek piece flows mad smooth
     
  2. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    ok i'll be a dick so i can come across more clearly

    i'm not gonna give you color ideas cause its a waste of good ink on such shitty letters.

    in other words: get your letters straight, do simples.

    EDIT: if you can make something better, then take the time to make it better cause nobody wants to see your rough work.

    emel -- looks pretty good, almost heat ! main issue is the lower half of your S, it just kinda dies off. don't have the A kick out so far so you can give the S a nice, solid and heavy lower.
    nitpick but might look better to have the upper right bar of the R insert on the lower right leg's origin. (yeah i am using anatomy terms!)
     
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  3. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    jetpack- take your own advice and read the new to graff thread....
    fame- use bars to make simples for now.. and keep them the same width throughout the piece
    Science802- go simpler
    Kasper- i like that handstylle!! but the ltters need work..but dont try to add any small doodads and just work on a whole peice and try to keep a flow, you sorta did this but in all the wrong places?dno how to explain it just keep but go a little simpler
     
  4. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    word Sample
    Rasek...to me your shits getting more and more like NAME .
     
  5. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    jetpack i love your style really sick paint that shit somewhere!
    emel thats lookin like its gunna be pretty nasty ink that shit
     
  6. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    bump

    emel- besides coverin the s too much thats dope. diggin the handy as well
    rasek- move the A out from the R a little, im not feelin the extension on the r either
     
  7. squider

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2704/lef1fc319248f5ea6bfe466tq1.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://img103.imageshack.us/img103/2704/lef1fc319248f5ea6bfe466tq1.a43ba99fad.jpg

    elidelph, crits please

    seywhat- the r on the second piece, the leg of it looks like it comes to far out, i'de either bring it in a bit or bring out the bottom part of the s to get it to be more symetrical

    emel- the squigley part that connects the s to r doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the letters, but without something there at all theres kinda a gap between the two, looks like a dope style though

    jetpack- the way the leg of your R overlaps the the A looks funny, and theres a word for i just can't think of it, where two lines run across the same path, and your k's crooked, i don't like the leg coming off it to much either, just keep tweaking your letters and shit will come together more
     
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  8. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    Squider - It starts off good the first two letters are ok, andafterthatitgoes downhill, you should losethe little addons aswell they drag theletters down.
    Seyar-Fresh simples.
    Rasek- I like it, i dontlike the bend on the First leg of the R tho if you got rid of that it would be fire.
    kasr- looks alright, i wanna see it inked tho.
     
  9. fonone

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    Jetpark - dont like the extension on the left of the R, and i dont like how the holes in between the letters and in the A etc arent shadow, looks like a radiator or something.

    squider - the first E is the only letter i like really, rest look goofy.

    seyar - fresh simps as always

    emel - the S is covered up too much by the A

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    getting my I on. thought id post up a pic now and one when its finished.
     
  10. rsakens

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  11. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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    you always do that fuckin E. change that shit up next time
     
  12. rsakens

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  13. Soboe!

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  14. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    rsakens- you need to work on flow and shape, alot your basic letters are ok but yopu shape is poor.
     
  15. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    experiment
    mhm i will give it a try
    by the way dit we ever exchange ?
    if not let me know if your interested
     
  16. Soboe!

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  17. JETPACK!!

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  19. rsakens

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    alright man i will try

    what is bunk :(

    and rasek i find that sketch alot creative for a simple letter black & withe sketch
    only that extension on the right bar of the R looks weird the rest of the letters are dope
     
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  20. Scream Out

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    rasek thats looking dope man, only thing i would change is the the little bit on the right leg of your R because it covers too much of your A

    heres a sketch i did yesterday, ive been playing around with some different styles the past day or so

    ai91.photobucket.com_albums_k301_Inhumation_newsketch.jpg
    the M needs some working and i need some new markers haha
     
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