keep your bars the same width. no arrows. lose them all. add some 3D or a drop shadow. ive got 10 cats (i believe) for this weekends paint battle im at work, so the names are off the top of my head me cais 00-made-00 clout nocancontrol cept emel vandal seyar
same goes for the rest of these, but do n o color, do not add backgrounds, cuz its not who has the cool BG,or the best colors and despite what any toy thinks they colors or BG's do not enhance the look if you have no structure, you might be able to impress your friends with the little bubbles but not anyone on here, cept for other toys who are also unaware. just crits not trying to be a dick Final thought: Recreate the letter from your keyboard before you do anything else, then post those up and see what you can improve on from there.
Why, how does that effect anyone/the forum/ or this board at all in a negitive way? sorry you gotta scroll down a little bit longer but.. damn dude, it aint that big of a deal just helpin the kid out like were supposed to do in here.
thanks mo.. ill go retry this stuff.. yea on the simpler lyfe2 one i tried doin that but i didnt realize that FE thing.. ill do new ones and put em up.
clout, send his piece to me anyways. ill either cut the worst ones. or ill send em to a mod anyways, and they wont be able to be polled. so kinna just to show the crowd what you did. ill prolly just cut the lousiest ones till i have 10, i have 11 now. but thats no gaurentee im gonna get 11 pieces come sunday. if you want in g3zt. send me the piece sunday. 12 now. this is going pretty well, im surprised. if i get many entries, im gonna try an make it a weekly thing.
View attachment 375963 new sketch, i might put this one in the collab, but prolly not. im gonna work on some different stuff tonight, when is the deadline amk? caer- im still not feelin the top of the e or the leg of the r vois- that top one is pretty clean, keep tweakin that sokeh- the o is covered up too much
i did these for girlfriends jsut messin around.. i know theyre not simples but just tell me what you think.. and im down for negative comments.. theyl only make me learn.. so tell exactly what you think
you got two girls? shits ill. anyways. first thing you need to learn. what simples are. those ARE simples.. just not very good simples. keep your bars the same width. connect your letters completely. dont do any add-ons or extensions until your letters look good by themselves. keep it up though, youve got potential from what i can see. esole i dont like your L, it looks more like a C or somethin, straight the bar a bit. but i like the kink in it.