Yah I feel you, but you need to think as your graffiti as a sketch.. Like say your good a drawing from real life.. Like perfect.. so incorporate objects in your graffiti and clean up the structure.. Either way.. it takes experience in time.... Try incorporating graffiti in everything.. thats how you develop a pretty strong art style.. Also some *****s been sketching for years and still suck ass.... Depends about dedication.. Juss think about wat u draw...
bump mar,fon,jers! [Broken External Image]:http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk174/jes_rk/1stpageblackbook.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i280.photobucket.com/albums/kk174/jes_rk/2ndpage.jpg
kabre- for a shitty freestyle that shit looks nice and proportional. irekn- the first one and the last one look the best. jers- that shit just looks dope man. armo- work on your second sketch more, more on the r and o, that shit would look dope if you worked on it more. apher- what can i say, that style just looks dope. jesr- that stuff actually looks good the way it is, simple. went simple on this. dewster- doesnt look to bad. add the 3d to the circle of the i. [Broken External Image]:http://img501.imageshack.us/img501/9384/06010ah0.jpg
azteka, your three d is kinda off. jesr, your r should be around the same size as your j. to give it a symetrical look. (red orange one) jers, your shit is mad hot brada. on the bottom of the spine of the r, that extention is a little wierd, but thats just being picky. fonone, your i on the middle piece, is more wild style then the others, color skeme is wierd, idk what it is..... maybe the colors are too contrasting..... or.... the white background throws it off.... idk, i really dk.
[Broken External Image]:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/scan-2-1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Kobra-1.jpg See on the frist page I used the Bar system to make my letters. Then I put them to gether in the second one. But that Look shity booboo. So what could I chage to make the letters flow, and look better. Or just better over all.
dont put the points in your bars. just kind of round em off or keep them squared at the ends. it will look alot better. also, stick with capital letters. youre on the right path.
i would say dont make all your letters so pointy, another thing would be to make everything propotionate [ like ur a is kinda flat on the slant side], choose your positioning and spacing better [ thats something im working on] and clean up your lines n u shud be good
yeah the O's are a bitch, all you can really do with them is make a regular O, just keep it proportional and the same size as the rest of your letters. once you make them all the same size and all capitals, the flow should come more naturally. youre from cleveland? you hear about HEK and MAK gettin knocked?
Hell yea my "o" look like damn dunuts. Lol. Alright Im re-doing it right now i post it when Im finshed.