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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    this was inspired by vandal-

    ai274.photobucket.com_albums_jj241_mazeonerr_hiphoproke.jpg

    I did it with the name ROKE, because kabre doesnt flow this good in this style.

    Keep it up vandal, I hope I get as dope as you.

    Can I get some crits vandal?
     
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  2. Czar One

    Czar One Senior Member

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    look. I gave you some solid advice. Take it if you want to improve, if not then whatever, no skin off my back.
     
  3. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    ya i gigled at that kabre cept ur a faggot get a life nd change ur style hoe try suttin new all u got is letters that look like poop shapped into letters and all have a lil ooze comin over the top nothing new you just change the color up you fuckin skank
     
  4. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    -cries- thanks for the crits. :(:(:(:(:(
     
  5. Czar One

    Czar One Senior Member

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    how bout someone actually crit my piece on the last page?
    haha.
     
  6. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    drop the extended ext. on the c and z, I like the c and z, not really feeling the a and r.
     
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  7. sheltr

    sheltr Senior Member

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    ye czar, good name btw. but i like the flowingness of it. really wooshy kinda feeling to it. just keep doing your thing and you'll progress it even more

    now for some crits of my own
    afarm4.static.flickr.com_3141_2546737022_6e094743cf.jpg_a4f0a23c50a330cf1bf56cae6c33a893.png
     
  8. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    sheltr i like that alot looks pretty sick
     
  9. "Bi2aR"

    "Bi2aR" Senior Member

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    look man don't be so damn sensitive, you can keep doing what you're doing, but you'll won't improve much, or you can do simples (which pretty much everybody has been telling you)
     
  10. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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  11. AcNt!

    AcNt! Member

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    wow is there really a need to start shit in the toy threads?
     
  12. Tokenkaligreens

    Tokenkaligreens Elite Member

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    stick around a lil longer you'll see this is nothing new. :)
     
  13. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    kabre, the fact that you would go out of your way to actually draw that is hilarious.
    shit's mad hip hop.


    CZAR, its good, except for the R, the randon extensions coming off the right leg, and the place where it connects to the main bar need to be fixed up.
    C and Z are dope.
     
  14. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    you better believe there is bitch!!!

    nah chill out guys. crit and i you cant handle the crits just chill back in your seat and think about how ill your gonna be next year.

    vandal, im bout to redo the sketch you just did.
     
  15. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    lol why you gunna redo it baze
     
  16. iMENACE

    iMENACE New Member

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  17. MarOne...

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    because it sucks.
     
  18. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    1 cuz im bored and hve nothing better to do.
    2 cuz ill tell you in pm when im done
    3 what kabre said but not so harsh. lol =]

    i also feel like doing something in that style.
     
  19. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    MarOne- Man o MAn. Just stop. I know Im a lil new to the whole graff. But man Check out the New to Graf. Page.
    Thats just a bunch of Letter with arrows which dont flow.
    Forget ever thing you "think" you know about Graff. A start over. New name and Star out with Bar, and SImps. Dude Trust me it helps. Them Once you get really good you can move up.
     
  20. AcNt!

    AcNt! Member

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    i like that one menace