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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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  2. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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  3. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    the purple was supposed to be part of the fill but it just ended up looking like highlights, i'm not that good at filling anyway so i thought i would get some practice. ill try it again without the extensions and a thinner purple, ill try one directional 3d as well

    inspired by something i saw in the paint thread
    ai305.photobucket.com_albums_nn229_letsgobombin_100_HPIM1255.jpg
    i realised that i love y's
    ai305.photobucket.com_albums_nn229_letsgobombin_100_HPIM1254.jpg
    smooth- the o and e seem thin compared to the rest, the exclamation mark is to small a hole at the bottom and it tapers down too thin and the middle bar of the e should be horizontal i think
    cancontrol- the bottom half of the skull seems weird what is that supposed to be? i think you should continue developing with that style, the horizontal bar of the l should be thin and the bottom one is nice
    beger- round the bottom of the g and the inside bit of the g
    smooth- nice, the a does look a bit like a r but i thought it was an a and i think i lower case a would not look as good
    bigel- you were one of the first people i saw with dope pieces when i was creeping through bs
    deco- just keep the basics of those letters and work with them instead
    rasek- i cant see yours
     
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  4. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    letsgobombin: yo, you better paint that fucken last one homie.
    thatd be fucken ill to see.
    one of the best simples ive seen in a while.
    just make the c abit thicker and bring the s a slight closer to it.
    seriously, go paint that shit man.
    Rasek: shits flowing nicely. the cracks are pretty ill too, i just don't see them fitting with the type of letters your trying to connect em with. know what i mean? other than that, just the extension comming out of the end of the R is kinda outta place imo. Maybe bring the letters abit closer together, real sick though homie.
     
  5. Mo152

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  6. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    give em to get em.
    :eek:
     
  7. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    if that last letter is an E than it looks sick man
     
  8. Mo152

    Mo152 Senior Member

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    i do all the time, i post like 5 or 6 crtits a post, about 2 or 3 at a time before asking for any. smart ass.
     
  9. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    ye but you've got to crit on every post you cant just crit when you feel like it and then expect people to crit you
     
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  11. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    i like that main blue one, just make the second e the same as the first one and dont point the g, try it like the one in the first page but without the line going down and with the big square head, obviously
     
  12. Mo152

    Mo152 Senior Member

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    why cant i crit whenever i feel like it?

    why do i have to crit of every post?

    it dose say gupe.

    the second pic, blue throw is fuckin dope man
     
  13. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    some lettering
    unfinished
    ai305.photobucket.com_albums_nn229_letsgobombin_100_HPIM1253.jpg
    ai305.photobucket.com_albums_nn229_letsgobombin_100_HPIM1248.jpg
    already critted everyone on this page
     
  14. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    through some 3d on that last one and it'd be fresh man...
     
  15. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    rasek - lookn ill dude, only thing i would change is where those extensions are coming from on the R and K, or even just have them not attached at all

    smooth_nuts - im not feeling that at much at all (though i kinda like the H), no flow and the proportions seem off, just work on same width bars for now before you start bending them too much

    pocs - the rollerish one would look ill with some 3d coming off it, and that second one looks highly Raby inspired if you catch my drift. regardless your progressing nicely keep at it

    said - fuckn dope man, im really feeling all of those throws

    heres a sketch from today, a bit fucked and a bad pic but oh well, styles slowly coming along
    ai91.photobucket.com_albums_k301_Inhumation_Photo290.jpg
     
  16. Oaklander

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  17. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    oaklander the swastikas are backwards
     
  18. Oaklander

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  19. silentchaos14

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    pocs- add some colour to the last one
    scream- not sure what it says
    oaklander- BARS!
    ai186.photobucket.com_albums_x65_silentchaos14_M4.jpg
    M freestyle, ignore the highlights.
    ai186.photobucket.com_albums_x65_silentchaos14_MorneSimp5.jpg
    pen simple from the last day of school
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    sticker
     
  20. Oaklander

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