well thats what im tryin to find out..i dunno what to do with it..i want it to look similar to the J with an extension to make it look like a g

 

krispy dig the piece not the colors

 

mabye like leave it but at the end bring it up a little and bring it back in or something, so it keeps the general shape but still has the basic form of a g

 

i like the G, i would make the A look more like an A and less like a Y
maybe take out the extension on the bottom?

 

first finished simp in a long time
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i dont know i think my other style was way better
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really love the fills.

 

Joca, stick to the first simple

Louis, nice clean lines, but you need to stay simple and develop structure.

Tunka, the newer simples are way hotter, but you've got cool fills for both of em.

 

Krispy... I'd say the the 'R' looks too much like a 'B' with the extension back and it flowing to next letter. But I could tell... just saying.
And I Couldn't tell it was a 'Y' really with it divided. you knowwwww?

 

Krisp, dope letter structure, but I'd definitely like to see some solid looking fills and detail in the 3d too.

Peace out all

 

oh yea and tunka, I'd have to disagree with you
This new Simple is way betterrr.
No offense but I don't like the old one, at all. And I think it's better, you're improving, aye?

 

Yah I just noticed that too actually. Krisp, if the bars don't overlap and divide in every letter, than ppl will be able to tell that's an 'R' not a 'B', nah mean?

 

i no what you mean about the r looking like a b. i cant make it a straight leg cuz it wont match the K. by overlapping you mean the bottom of the Rback goes overlapps the R leg? what do you mean by divide tho?

 

The part that is circled. you know how the 'Y' has two extensions. one looks like it's a bar just over it.

 

thx for the feedback every one
heres some fresh ones of both styles
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louis xiv i dont know wut the secount letter is
fix that

 

Lovin the Second one, Theose bars in the first one seemed to helped out alot.

 

Yea i agree with blue on that louis.
Still think the first tunka is way hottter


But it's your throwies so whatever you like best i guess.

 

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bottom of page so bump

esoe
i relly like that but make the vertical bar of ur first e thicker