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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Rasek What up bro.- That shit is nice. I would have made the A and E the same as the other letter but still looks fresh bro. You should go and paint that somewhere.

    Screem- Try a Differnt Color scheme look nice tho.
     
  2. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    rasek, shits fucken ill homie, go paint that shit immediately!
    jares, try and fix your j up abit, it looks allot like a d. i would also take off the bubbles leaking over the letters. (throwup) i like your throwup the best man, stay simple, looking good.
    scream out, fucken sick ass fill man, reallyyyyyyyyyyyyy feeling that
    bak, was gonna give you some. guess not. GIVE EM TO GET EM
    aher, im fucken speechless i dont know how the fuck you did that, you got fucken talent bro

    new steez im trying out.
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  3. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    haha,trust me bro,this already happened to me before,stuffs mad annoying,cause you don't feel redoing it all again.ok down to crits
    the gun looks perfect,just with the rocket launcher,maybe try adding more shine there,and at the end of the gun,make the back grip more clear and its good to go
     
  4. GaZm13

    GaZm13 Elite Member

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    That stuff is pretty cool, but I don't see how it is graff related or in a blackbook. It should be posted in Your Other Art, No Graff thread. Just my opinion. Cool stuff though.
     
  5. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    I would post it in those threads but they are utterly dead ... here its constant posting and critting ... i was quick feedback so i can get to work again..

    And SoutPole your such a noob..its a GRENADE LAUNCHER not rocket launcher ahhahahahahaha ahhahahaha hahahahah

    Thanks for the comments ill work onit.
     
  6. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    I would post it in those threads but they are utterly dead ... here its constant posting and critting ... i was quick feedback so i can get to work again..

    And SoutPole your such a noob..its a GRENADE LAUNCHER not rocket launcher ahhahahahahaha ahhahahaha hahahahah

    Thanks for the comments ill work onit.
     
  7. numberonestunna

    numberonestunna Senior Member

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  8. hazetheone

    hazetheone Elite Member

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  9. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Then crits crits crits, you should give.
     
  10. Spark391

    Spark391 Senior Member

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    That ladys boobs look wierd, the left one is bigger than the right one n her arm that holds a spray can looks very wierd. But still a nice sketch.
    Amk - love it, add more shadows and reflections n stuff.. you just inspired me to start learning fotoshop, but first im gonna get some sleep, im so tierd of todays trip.
    numer1stunna - the 1st simpel is nice, the second ones letters look wierd, like the upper part of the k is raped, on other pieces the extentions look wack, i think you should go more simpel, avoid extentions right now and get the letters down
    said - that throw looks dope, that makes me kinda sad, i can't come up with very good throws
    calculating - i don't know, that stuff looks wierd, can't give realy something constructive. i would reccomend you to get basic simple letters down (if you dont have em down) before going with freaky styles, it's like that in regular art , you have to have basic art aknowledge before starting doing some abstract shit.
    ilikekicks - only not feeling the bottom of the S everythang else is fine, good job
    scream - looks good for me as war as i can read, but im just sleepy i quess. that brown outline dosen't give realy much to the piece, you should add something lighter warm color to give it power imo,.
    bak - with that character you should make some parts lighter and some parts darker n shit, i don't realy like the letters, S looks wierd, keep doing them simpels and youll get em down.
    rasek - nothing has changed, everytime i come here you have the same letters, im not dissing but you should start changin' em up, don't be afraid to do it, it's important to have nice simple style letters down, but now you have em down so u should start bending em, having extentions, developing your own style, right now you are not procressing, those cracks could be better, look someones elses cracks, my explenation sounds real retarded.

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    My first post after months, i already gived crits so i though that i should post lil something
     
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  11. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    my outine was an orangy kinda colour before i fucked up the rest of the page, the brown and black are just there to save the piece
     
  12. bleh.bleh.bleh

    bleh.bleh.bleh Senior Member

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    Mass, Thats your first time using Photoshop ?! Damn, Whenever i try with that program i always fuck up. Too many buttons lol...I looks real nice though
     
  13. -GEKS-

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  14. Spark391

    Spark391 Senior Member

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    bottompage bump

    geks, first simple looks fine, letters are not in equal size, not feelig the others though, they are bended wierd n shit
     
  15. 7thIncision

    7thIncision Senior Member

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    Elm man, dont bother colouring in your work so much, its just wasted time that could be spent working on structure.
    Just like.. Keep that shit up, then you'll find you can tweak this, add that, etc etc.

    For now try to move the letters closer together, maybe even mess around with some overlap.
     
  16. Spark391

    Spark391 Senior Member

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    ha yea, did it at night, was very tired, should had finished it in the morning :d less fuckups then.
     
  17. South-Pole

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    lmao at calling me a noob,yes sorry if i dont play COD 4 ;P

    Pyre-the simp is the best one of them all,try doing simps like these
    same for you geks
    spark-your 3-d is fucked up,and loose those arrows and those add-ons
    lime-that lady is weird,colouring looks,but theres too many random extensions/add-ons/arrows...loose them all and work more on lettering
     
  18. Mass Appeal

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  19. PROJECT LINK

    PROJECT LINK Senior Member

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    yo i drew this in a matter of like 10 min...but the coloring took me a few 1 of my new characters..
     
  20. sheltr

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    afarm4.static.flickr.com_3004_2701783305_d19f4754d8.jpg_a4f0a23c50a330cf1bf56cae6c33a893.png
    hey wouldnt mind crits on this, aside from the fact the L sucks
    thanks bros