Dope man, I like your style, I think the R would look better with a little tweaking, but it's lookin good. Keep going. On a bad note, here's a wack late night freestyle View attachment 394773
go a little simpler and theres no need for the middle e bar and the a bar to have a horn at the end i think it would look better without it
bumpsy emma- sorry, take off all those random hooks on the end of the bars like on the top of the e and the a and the middle bars as well, also if youre doing this for someone, make the final design before you colour it because ive seen you post the same kinda thing a few times with different changes, you dont need to ink it until its completely done czar- im not really feelin any of them my favourite is the blue one that looks like an n, if its a z i dont like it but it would make a nice n, it looks alot better if you tilt youre head to the right a bit dzee- just get your simps down before you start inking stuff, you got alot of work to do keane- you actually gonna put those stickers up? if you do make sure you put then somewhere out of reach, you dont want all that hard work going to waste. i like them but the only e i like out of the slaps is the second e on the first stick, nice exchanges as well
I give up on you kid. Three times I've told you to go simpler, back to the basics and you didn't listen. Oh well, if in a couple of months time you're wondering why everyone else on here's getting better and you're staying the same, it's your own fault. letsgobombing - Don't really like that first style, but I'm definatley feeling that S. Czar - That's pretty tight bro, just fix the loop of the R
View attachment 394783 I did this one about a year ago, then kinda stopped for a while. Now I started to write again, and I think that I'm doing a lot better than I did, I'll posted a few more up later when I get pictures of them. Criticism is welcome I know I'm not good I just want advice on how I could do better.
View attachment 394806 another shits sketch crits 3rd wrld army dont use a black outline n then ablack fill idiot u cant read it lol baconator do simples like the letters on your keyboards once u can pimp those then start twistin shit same with u lets go bombing simples
wers-i see some mad potential there,maybe try taking off the swirl on the bottom part of the E,get your s up a bit,and try changing that R leg. letsgo-looks fine to me third world-the only way to get better is by sketching,so if you stop and take back months after its useless,ok do keyboard letters,and use bars baconator-read the new 2 graff thread
i hit up tera in the book... srry for the bad flik quality my batteries died in my camera so i had to use my phone.... ill get a better flik of it up later... View attachment 394811
devil at sea level: try going a little simpler with out the exstensions and connect all your bars, dont seperate em with lines tera: looks dope just wish the E was a little less covered up
Meko: Dope. I'll have your's up later tonight Meko. That shit is Ill son makes my name look fresh and you did it in the BB I got you man.
devil at sea level- dont run the lines of the 3-d into eachother like that they should come out of the corner and all the 3-d should be going in the same direction wers - your W looks like an M and im not digin the R the one you had before was better this is from 2 weeks ago ish
yea word meko i did this mad quick, its sloppy, just wantted to see crits on the idea bc someone said use "bars" when i posted something like this so i put them in i guess you just connect them though, not "on top of each other"...but how do i go simpler? i thought this was as simple as it gets without doing just basic keyboard letters, im not really seeing where the extensions are either, just the basic letters...