i think that shroom olny looks good cuz the color. can i go on a little rant tho. Ive been feeling that some people get lucky with style, like some people start sketching and luckily jump on a style that everyone likes... i sketch soo much and i still suck! [Broken External Image]:http://i202.photobucket.com/albums/aa13/bobbby_fisher/CCI00001.jpg
Krispy- stfu, your top one is gettin pretty good. and look at the fuckin letters the color made no difference ...but i agree with what you say abotu people's style
Yo giz make the top of ur r more rounded and beefy like this dude said it would make it more ill and the balance would be right..
crits pleasee. yeah viruz, now that i look at it, the W is pretty spaced out compared to the other letters.. eh oh well. Gizrd- that looks dope. and that Mushroom thing is wicked coloring. and Krispy, i like it allll except the top of the S
Nice E tho Bro.. But the O and the W could have been better. The O seems a lil too Plain but its look good.
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yeha i wanted to make it pointier, but if i pointed out the bottom, i wouldda made it look like an A.. so idk...ill try n work with this... idk if iw anna color it i always fuck it up.. edit: i like that rasek,. the E looks a little weird on the bottom bar, but im feelin it.
thanks for the feedback everyone, ill definately keep working on my R. the mushroom peice is... just.... great. someone said about the letter structure, but i dig it OCTONE your c and e got overlapped too much KRISPY is phat WOE your w is far too wide, and stab something through the center of the O if you feel the need to add a little something extra
hmm, i already outlined it in sharpie, but ill keep that in mind for next time. i dont even think your R is bad i really like the G and I though keep it up dude.
pack-the e looks weird to me. other than that. noice. ok there's nothing on this page. lol so... MEGAlead (it's a pencil i used) View attachment 398529 CRITS PLEASE (don't worry doods, that's not my usual handy)
woe- that is is fresh dude.. if all the letters were the same width that would be dope as hell.. add a background i wanna see more.. Freedom- keep up the good work with the bars and im sre you'll find something that you like.. i think its an awesome style, just needs a bit of tweaking. Octone- fresh style like last time, just keep working on spacing your letters out a bit more. Rasek- shit is fresh as always.. i think you have to have one of the best most consistant styles on these threads dude.. keep it up.. anyways.. i got carried away with stupid extensions and shit last night so i re worked a peice a bit, similar fill tho... critz
three cheers for FUCKING up a background. ughh... snew i like the letters. and framin-it, that looks really nice dude edit: the background is silver, purple and blue,...hard to see..
Woe.... those letters make the background look ill.... thats not a good thing, you have some seriously poor structure and from what i've seen of your work i would have to assume you have no real understanding of structure for the letters you use your O looks more like a U because of the break in the top of the letter, your E looks similar to a P, you could easily pass it off as an E or a P because there is little to nothing defining the letter, it looks like you used maybe 4 bars in your entire sketch and they are all in that poorly constructed E. dont worry about random extensions connections add ons or any of the other crap youve slapped onto your letters. in my opinion you have not progressed at all with the name Woe, the new to graff thread could help you a lot if you arent to ignorant to accept this advice. dont get ahead of your self, this goes for everyone in the toy forum no beef to Woe p.s. i dont often crit here anymore due to the fact that nobody will fucking listen, if you are willing to accept some honest crit feel free to p.m. me. i have never claimed to be any kind of king but ive been around a second and i may be abel to help some of you fuckers out if i have the free time.
RASEK, THAT'S HOT EVERY LETTER EXCEPT THE E IS GOOD. I FIXED THE E UP HOW I THOUGHT IT WOULD LOOK GOOD. BRING OUT THE MIDDLE BIT FURTHER AND THE ANGLE OF THE BOTTOM BAR IS UGLY. ANYWAY JUST WHAT I'D DO WITH IT. GOING OUT NOW CATCHYER. [Broken External Image]:http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6688/rasekfixjy2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/6688/rasekfixjy2.8b84c48bed.jpg