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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
Props to everyone on this page for putting in effort, this threads getting good.
Aimr-nice and clean
infoe-get rid of the round ends on the X.
South pole-good stuff man, that R is so sick, keep it like that.
Smooth-great stuff man, im jealous
Rsake-where is my xchange? just kidding but seriously i'd like one, sick as always.
Mabe-i love it, post more
task- great simples keep with it
evasion-holy bajesus that is nice.
Crits aside from my shitty bar proportions and kerning(letter spacing) Just wanna know if my bar bends make sense and flow well together. It was a quick sketch.
Got really bored in science
Ahem everything looks too forced make it flow and make everything looks smoother and push the letters in closer
task not feelin that k
No offense, but haven't you posted that entire sketch letter by letter for the last week?
im really really impressed with what ive been seeing lately.
aimr, tight letters, but fuck the background. add a 3D or a shadow, it'd look fresh as fuck.
ahem, keep workin on the flow. that bend in the M kills the flow somethin heavy. have the spines of your letters slant the same slope in the same direction. it'll help, bring the letters closer, add a quick 3D. make your M less wider, the same width as the rest of the letters. try sketching smaller, i bet the results would be more beneficial.
bump cause i really like the hoer :/
I GOT DAPS FIRST!
acerborn-no, that was a quick 10 min sketch for crit on bending, this is what you're referring to.
man just stick with what your doing in that last sketch right there.....and work on your 3d its off in alot of places
just some quick shit
excuse the double post
o's lookin good.
try rotating the image if u can
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work on keeping ur 3d consistent for every letter. try using a focus point, that helps a lot.
ahem- make the bottom middle of the M less pointed
akel- the letters are dope but i don't like the fill, too dull for me i guess
i like nice bright vibrant colors
not finished, gonna remove some stuff and add color
and i'm a bit skeptical with the R, not sure what to change on it
sorry for the size
liking the blocks hin...sep the kink in the i on the green one :l
nice shit mr hint
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that hoer you did is dope homey!
hint- i like the western one.
farik - lookin dope so far.
akel- that is my favorite piece from you. that shits on another level.
my man hoer
too fucking dope!!
and anyone that misses me im in college now so i should be posting alot more :0D
The R kinda messes up the flow to your piece try not to cover it up so much with your A cause i cant tell if its an R or B other than that good work
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