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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. LikeRainButNot

    LikeRainButNot Member

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    mabe if u outlined the letters in another color the shadow would fit in more.
    and ya pics should be working now.
     
  2. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    oh, i thought that was 3d and in that case your drop shadow is really off and i would recommend not putting silver lines in your drop shadow
     
  3. fonone

    fonone Senior Member

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  4. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    i prefer hilltop hoods and bliss n eso to drapt. but ozzie hip hop is dope. listenin to "in the shadows" by vents an suffa MC. dope song

    [Broken External Image]:http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/6761/rasek53as7.jpg

    oh, crits.
    hint-the spade is wack, but ive never liked spades. so it could be a personal preference. some of bar widths vary in consistancy. for example, the right bar of the N is a different width than the bar of the T.

    irekn baby that shit is dope, i like the R in the first one. it's a lot better than the E in my opinion. that K is dope too. im not feelin your new steeze too much though to be honest. i dont like the R or E in the second, i think its the curvy bar things.

    pocs, there isnt too much to crit. pretty solid. hot or miss with some sketches. but thats what advancement is. try bending the bars in wierder angles, see how that'd look
     
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  5. fonone

    fonone Senior Member

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    thanks for the crits. i think your E is letting you down there^, turn the A upside down and i think that's a pretty decent E, personally. im listening to walk on by the hilltop hoods, dope song haha.

    edit: i just realised how much shit i fucked up in that second sketch haha... alot of the 3d is off, the bottom right leg of the I... eh, whatever.
     
  6. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    cocksandwich
     
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  7. Jet

    Jet Elite Member

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    jetpack you down for an exchange?
     
  8. skeetz

    skeetz Senior Member

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  9. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    lets see you make a straight letter joint anymore of a one liner. you should do a capital A and K, the middle letters looked dwarfed

    either way, it'll shave minutes off my simples when i bomb.

    yeah hint, ill start workin on it.
     
  10. skeetz

    skeetz Senior Member

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    did it to see if i could make a straight letter one liner
    i dont rly like it but its one line and that was the point
    View attachment 401635
     
  11. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    i'd rather take the extra couple of seconds and make it a near-one liner:)
     
  12. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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  13. simple zen

    simple zen Elite Member

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    fuck the letter X up it's stupid ass. the hardest letter to perfect IMO
     
  14. respERATION

    respERATION Banned

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    i love that ^^ it still looks amazing even though you can tell it didn;t take you long

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  15. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Rasek- Feelin the "A" Bro. Just still not use to that "E" Looks good. I can see your starting to add on to your steez you should paint that bro.

    Rake- Your On the right track with the bars. Good Stuff, just Use Str8 letters man.

    Irek- Yo The "R" in the Second one is weak to me, but the other letters are solid. In the First one that is a plain out good simp.
     
  16. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    me too
    aha
     
  17. PROJECT LINK

    PROJECT LINK Senior Member

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    HINT-once again man raw peice i like the green out line..
    Fonone-pretty str8 man u need some work on the letters and work on the color selection the top 1 is the best...
    DRAK-lol i like the colors bro
    RESPERATION-yo u need work on the letter man i dont like how u filled in but besides that its pretty str8
     
  18. I Hold The Throne

    I Hold The Throne Member

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    ai136.photobucket.com_albums_q172_korky_monkey_08_27_08_1607.jpg
    This is something i did today but i have not finished it

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    my homeboy offset

    comment please
     
  19. respERATION

    respERATION Banned

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    huh??....sorry i don't understand,you want me to work on my letters and my fills?
     
  20. I Hold The Throne

    I Hold The Throne Member

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    Well i turned the page a lil so i could fit the whole word on my phone cam