yeah is the camera....it sucks...i'll try and get a picture tommorrow when it's light out cause that the only time it seems to work
15 minute quickie to pass the time until someone wants a pen battle. [Broken External Image]:http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/6838/007ee6.jpg jask- not bad, i like the dual green one the best. keep slappin. zaro- the top is pretty crap. the bottom throw looks nice, but the a and r look almost identical, and possibly stolen. keep workin on it. repress/ppres - mad steezy. resp - waitin on the better photos. those make you look like you have parkinsons. otherwise, the letters i can make out look pretty good. infow - likin the pens. just make things crisper. it'll help out over all. do a cross hatch or something. i don't personally understand 3d that isn't connected to the letters appropriatly, but i think the bottom one would look loads better if you picked one focal point for the 3d to come out of then use a ruler to link all the edges to. to me the parts that stick out the most on it are the dot on the i and the i itself. the 3d appears to be going in at least 4-5 different directions. it should be more fluid. i like your letters tho.
Thanks for the crit. Im just trying to keep with simples so i dont get ahead of myself. Yeh they look preety simillar but nah not stolen. Thats not my style.
^^^^ no disrespect meant, sa'll good man. throwie styles have a way of looking similar. keep with the simps man. you'll get pretty far pretty quick.
None taken.I like your stuff, the letters look nice and clean. But one comment. Your handstyles look kinda weak if im being honest. I dunno maybe its not your thing.
handystyles really aren't my thing, altho i think their important to every writer. i'd really like to see my sketches advance more, then, spend time busting my ass on handstilos. throw ups are still kind of not my thing either, but i feel like the more i work on them the better they get. all crits are appreciated man!
Yeah, I agree, your pieces look dope, but them handstyles need WERK! I would suggest working on that shit...
^^^ looks nice. i think the extension of the 2nd leg of the r goes too far, which in the end blocks the i making it harder to decipher. and i don't understand whats coming out of the end of the second leg of the m, but to each his own. i saw you post somewhere else here and spent a couple minutes trying to put it together. your coloring reminds me of cais/atlok, which if you don't know em, is a compliment. he's pretty steezy of late.
found an old sketch [Broken External Image]:http://img362.imageshack.us/my.php?image=phunkva9.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img362.imageshack.us/my.php?image=phunkva9.jpg
I havn't sketched a simp in a few months haha so I know it's bad sense simples man no edgy shit or nothin just straight up simples. hal can't read it but it looks pretty nice atomik good piece zaro Practice, alot.